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Mov3mnt
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Please check out my new track 'Binary Rhythm' and post your comments here!

Finished track. Still not happy with the bass line but anyways. feedback would be appreciated.
07-06-2009 15:31
drw89 drw89 is a male
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Chill intro love the short amens!
Have no idea where this is going, maybe jazz, could be some neuro.
Ok after 2 minutes waiting for a massive drop i realised it must be dub Big Grin .
Like the vibe of it and there's nothing wrong with the bassline btw. Hits you right in the kicker!
Nice track dude but i expected something else (my bad Smile )
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07-06-2009 15:37
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Ok, beginning obviously left for dj mixing. Nice atmo, tho. Ugh, I love that sax.

This is getting rougher every second, me likes it. The sub is just tad too quiet. Maybe boosting it a bit.

Wow, I thought that was 'beginning' when, actually, the whole track follows that style. Must say I am surprised, just still don't know whether pleasantly or not. Hmm, the bass really do needs more edits and notes, when looking from this point of view, now.

Good usage of FX, the beat becomes a tad boring after a while. Or maybe it becomes boring, because the instruments are repetitive. Try adding another synth etc.

All in all, ok track. 7/10

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07-06-2009 22:40 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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def got that old school vibe with those stabs (ed rush esque). No real noticible drop and that string sample just keeps running. Doesnt keep my attention. Just sounds like the intro throughout. Need to divide the tune into sections like a story. This story never climaxes. Get a heavier drum in there to fill it out and try to put the Bass lines on the and's like 1 AND 2 (rest) AND....as least that is how I hear it. Keep it up cause the concept is great.

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08-06-2009 15:14 Homepage of Dethworm
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starts off promissing, nice build up

but it builds forever, I can imagine this as an intermezzo in an obscure mix. quite alright if you wanted it so but it could be so much better, with a real bassline next to that sub

not much to say really, like the sounds, vibe is there just needs exploring more

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09-06-2009 00:02 Homepage of cynik
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Nice track man, really good vibe running throughout the track even if the arrangement isn't quite yet locked down. Wink

I really liked the samples you used, they're high quality. The snare was hard for me to notice though amidst everything else going on, I think the track might benefit from turning the hats a tad bit down and adding some low end to the snare.

Maybe the track is just too busy for my liking Big Grin , but you did a superb job. Good mixdown, great vibes!
10-06-2009 13:10
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very fresh sounds in the intro, track starts off really nice... don't like the sub that much, maybe question of preference... but very nice usage of fx and percussion... but gotta agree with the others, track just goes on and on for too long without any drop... innovative ideas here though, likin it overall! keep workin on it Big Grin

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12-06-2009 12:50
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bit of a strange intro, drums are a little quiet, could use beefing up more....needs a more 'set-out' structure i think, theres lots of variation and movement in the track but it sounds almost 'too' random, hard to catch the vibe of the track, no real drop either makes the structure seem too random as well.....track is too long with no real defining point to it, nice idea but a bit too unstructured and arranged to work well..

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