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My 2nd effort. Im happy with the overall production and structure, but not so sure about the levels/mastering. Gimme your opinion if you get chance. I used FL 8 and Nuendo 3.
I have to say massive thanks to 'Seven Gun' for providing a number of the bass sounds (taken from his Bass pack in the samples section) on this track, my basses sound pants along side those, so cheers mate.
Sub has too much reverb and needs some damping. Vocal is cool.
Can't hear the kick it, but the loop rolls very nice i have to say. (work that kick!)
I fkin love the sample @ 2:28!!! Reminds me of an old hardcore track (english muffin from lenny dee)
Track has a nice vibe going but the kick and the roll overall needs work.
Good job keep em coming!
Hihats at the beginning are way too loud. The bass is lost when all the beats come on, I guess that's because you have so many hihats that are fighting for space.
The snare is a bit quiet, turn it up. Oh, so you added another snare on top. Sounds ok now, but still thinking that first snare should be louder in the first part. You can lower its' volume after that.
I can't hear the kick. Try searching the .be for sidechaining, so you can make that kick fire through the bass. And layer another, high-freq kick on top of it, makes it pop.
Nice fx and vocals, used fine. The high-end is killing me, you gotta lower those
7/10
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love that hi hat...and those great computer extremely low frequency samples. One more FX pad sample is needed in the intro. try to cut down the dely in the envelope on that Amen type break. That snare coming in really reminds me of some older 90's type vibes. Really AK1200 sounding tune here. Ever heard prepare for assault? MARIJUANA!!!! weird falling piano sound in the drop. I'd say it still needs a little work in sound shaping just to really catch the mind. Really well thought out though and the idea is mega bombastic.
Listen to - AK1200 - Prepare for Assault
Read - Age of Spiritual Machine by Ray Kurzweil
I did have an extra FX sample in the intro, but took it out as i couldnt hear the opening Computer sample well enuff. I'll look at that again but maybe lower the sample
I've never heard that 'Prepare For Assault' track. It seems to be the only track he hasnt got on YT
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08-06-2009 17:49
den_bert unregistered
overall feel is very nice
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But the hihats are way too prominent. Basses are nice too. And you have some nice wicked sound effects
. Nice one!
Too much hi end going on in the break, mixdown is too sharp (way beyond the point where I'd say id has sparkle).
Otherwise nice track, good stereo, nicely rolling, good intro.
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Cheers for all the input all, the beats defo need beefing up, and maybe i should'nt have compression on every sound in the track.
And the hi end, as everyone says is way to 'high'.
ez man, track sounds ok, just whats been said already really. seven made most of them bass's in 3 x osc in fruity, get bashing away on that thing n ya get some serious sounds from it
I tried using the 3 x osc, but came nowhere near recreating Sevens bass's. Mine were more trancey sounding, which im not really into, but now i know how he made them i can experiment a lot more
whats missing is what you said already the mastering kicks need to stand out more basically most of the lower end other than that it's kick ass just master it