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Andy Moore Andy Moore is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Digital Communication' and post your comments here!

My 2nd effort. Im happy with the overall production and structure, but not so sure about the levels/mastering. Gimme your opinion if you get chance. I used FL 8 and Nuendo 3.
I have to say massive thanks to 'Seven Gun' for providing a number of the bass sounds (taken from his Bass pack in the samples section) on this track, my basses sound pants along side those, so cheers mate.

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07-06-2009 02:31
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Sub has too much reverb and needs some damping. Vocal is cool.
Can't hear the kick it, but the loop rolls very nice i have to say. (work that kick!)
I fkin love the sample @ 2:28!!! Reminds me of an old hardcore track (english muffin from lenny dee)
Track has a nice vibe going but the kick and the roll overall needs work.
Good job keep em coming!


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07-06-2009 15:31
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Hihats at the beginning are way too loud. The bass is lost when all the beats come on, I guess that's because you have so many hihats that are fighting for space.
The snare is a bit quiet, turn it up. Oh, so you added another snare on top. Sounds ok now, but still thinking that first snare should be louder in the first part. You can lower its' volume after that.
I can't hear the kick. Try searching the .be for sidechaining, so you can make that kick fire through the bass. And layer another, high-freq kick on top of it, makes it pop.

Nice fx and vocals, used fine. The high-end is killing me, you gotta lower those Big Grin

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07-06-2009 22:51 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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Consider them lowered lol, thanks 4 the comments chaps. I know it needs more work so i'll start with the hats Wink

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08-06-2009 00:25
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love that hi hat...and those great computer extremely low frequency samples. One more FX pad sample is needed in the intro. try to cut down the dely in the envelope on that Amen type break. That snare coming in really reminds me of some older 90's type vibes. Really AK1200 sounding tune here. Ever heard prepare for assault? MARIJUANA!!!! weird falling piano sound in the drop. I'd say it still needs a little work in sound shaping just to really catch the mind. Really well thought out though and the idea is mega bombastic.
Listen to - AK1200 - Prepare for Assault
Read - Age of Spiritual Machine by Ray Kurzweil

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08-06-2009 15:00 Homepage of Dethworm
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Thanks mate, sweet comments there.

I did have an extra FX sample in the intro, but took it out as i couldnt hear the opening Computer sample well enuff. I'll look at that again but maybe lower the sample Wink

I've never heard that 'Prepare For Assault' track. It seems to be the only track he hasnt got on YT Confused

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08-06-2009 17:49
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overall feel is very nice Smile .
But the hihats are way too prominent. Basses are nice too. And you have some nice wicked sound effects Happy . Nice one!
08-06-2009 21:04
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dunno about the start, for very long theres only bass hihats and spoken bits. but its not that bad

once the beats drop they dont do enough damage, sound extremely filtered

on the other hand some of the sounds are very nice and the feel is alright, I can hear where youre taking this

potentially a good tune

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08-06-2009 23:58 Homepage of cynik
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Too much hi end going on in the break, mixdown is too sharp (way beyond the point where I'd say id has sparkle).
Otherwise nice track, good stereo, nicely rolling, good intro.

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09-06-2009 14:18 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Cheers for all the input all, the beats defo need beefing up, and maybe i should'nt have compression on every sound in the track.
And the hi end, as everyone says is way to 'high'.

Im on it Drummer

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09-06-2009 15:17
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ez man, track sounds ok, just whats been said already really. seven made most of them bass's in 3 x osc in fruity, get bashing away on that thing n ya get some serious sounds from it

big ups

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09-06-2009 18:44 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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Cheers mate.

I tried using the 3 x osc, but came nowhere near recreating Sevens bass's. Mine were more trancey sounding, which im not really into, but now i know how he made them i can experiment a lot more Big Grin

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10-06-2009 07:56
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when i get time ill sort u some presets so ya can see how they are made.

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10-06-2009 12:57 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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quote:
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when i get time ill sort u some presets so ya can see how they are made.


Sweet !!! Drummer

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10-06-2009 17:32
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whats missing is what you said already the mastering kicks need to stand out more basically most of the lower end other than that it's kick ass just master it Smile
13-06-2009 07:06
Andy Moore Andy Moore is a male
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Cheers mate Big Grin

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