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Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Fracture Point' and post your comments here!

A little idea I have been working on for a while...thought I would upload it on the site for some feedback and insight. Thanks in advance!

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05-06-2009 21:01 Homepage of Dethworm
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Drummer love it!

drums should be more clear

othrwise it rocks!

why arent you on skype? get on mate, got a few new bits n bobs

Drummer

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05-06-2009 22:26 Homepage of cynik
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I agree, this is wicked. A really solid tune all the way through. Definitely has a pro-feel to it.

I actually like those gritty, dirty beats. Love the bass sounds too, although they are a little too dominant at times.

Something which I feel this tune lacks is a little bit of atmosphere. You might want to think about adding a subtle background pad for a few bars?

Everything else tho is really sweet. Well done!

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05-06-2009 23:38 Homepage of Tomos
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Some dark shit man! Bigup
Around 55" it sounds a bit messy because of the rides which are rather loud.
Drop sounds pretty messy too because the mid bass that got added sounds very muddy.
Turn down rides a tad, get the mud out of those basses.

Track could do with some more slightly dark SFX to add up to the atmosphere and to keep things interesting.
Thank God you didn't make those typical techstep basslines.


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05-06-2009 23:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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Great advice gentelmen...Def gunna clear up those bass frequencies and get some more dark SFX going througout...also wanna make the drop a measure longer and more dramatic...all the syth work is right out of my Moog LP the nastiest synthesizer alive!!!

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06-06-2009 00:52 Homepage of Dethworm
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like the synth you kicked it off with very nasty and the rides are nice too, when the beats come in the sound a little lazy (not in a bad way just slower than i would have liked, not sure how to word it) when it drops its very nasty indeed. i really like the bass sounds you used and that pad thing that comes in adds an eere feel. i would have liked a bit more punch esp from the beats i think it would make a huge difference and really drive the tune a lot harder Big Grin but apart from that a really narsty track, good stuff
06-06-2009 02:39
Andy Moore Andy Moore is a male
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Supoib'

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