Good intro melodies and beats, I could imagine them working well at a club. However, after the drop I found myself loosing interest. I'm really not keen on that bassline. You're onto the right idea with the beats in the drop but they sound quite messy. Whatever plugins you've got them playing through you need to tone them down a bit.
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Drums sound a bit muffled and over compressed to me.
Melodies are good, but not superb, they should be even more catchy because that's the thing that should keep your audience tied down to your tune.
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sounds like quite a commercial track (which ain't a bad thing at all imo), build up works well, drums could be a bit more clear and dominant, they get lost slightly with the orchestral stabs in the intro jsut try balance the levels out a bit more so the drums come thru better)
not overly excited about the bassline melody, but thats down to personal pref, overall a good effort
melodys aint bad and the drums sound realy energentic. the drum roll before the breakdown is cool good use of fx after the drop. i think it could all gell together a little better im not a fan of these basslines they sound a bit odd to me like the phonejacker theme tune but im not a fan of jump up really so dont take that to heart
as a dancefloor tune with work i think it could be good man