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demure 
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Please check out my new track 'Recess- My First Serious Attempt At Dubstep' and post your comments here!
this is something i made today and its more on the experimental side of things, i know this is not gonna tickle everyones fancy but i am pretty happy with it 
lemme know what you think, all made in reason 4 
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30-05-2009 01:57 |
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D2o
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30-05-2009 10:39 |
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BattleDrone
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Sweet... doesn't sound very experimental to me.
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30-05-2009 11:14 |
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Ketz
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30-05-2009 11:59 |
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Tomos
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Very nice. Melodies are simple and sweet. Like Ghost said, it's great to hear some dub elements in a dubstep tune.
However, the bass and kick both sound a tad too loud to me tho. They dominate the mix too much and have a tendency to drown out the other elements.
I think this tune would probably benefit from some simplification. At times, it sounds like there are too many sound FX all playing on top of each other.
Overall tho, this is a cracking first attempt at dubstep. Well done.
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30-05-2009 12:25 |
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tryptech
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Hii
i especially like how you manage to stick the bass and te drums so well together. You got some nice atmosperes in thet track. Very nice shizzle man
For the vocal sample hit me on msn or so
reinout.claes@planetinternet.be not scarlet i was wrong
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30-05-2009 13:52 |
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demure
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cheers lads will take onboard whats been said
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30-05-2009 13:55 |
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g2theross
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I'm not usually a massive dubstep fan but this tracks enjoyable. Loving the ambience, and the first bass that hits is tight. For a first attempt at this style I rekon youv'e done a pretty good job. My only minor criticism is that the drums could change up some more.
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31-05-2009 06:37 |
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notmymood
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It tickles mine just fine, actually. To be quite honest, it sounds rather perfect to me. Aint got that much to complain about. Its lovely.
Keep up the good work.
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31-05-2009 06:42 |
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brucifer
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Nice intro mate.
Think ya distorted bass needs bring forward.
I actually quite like this track, but it feels like it isn't really going anywhere. It needs to branch of, maybe with some nice jazz note or something.
Did enjoy though.
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31-05-2009 10:21 |
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demure
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well cheers
i been workin on improving it a bit so will get an improved version up soon 
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31-05-2009 13:43 |
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Paracyte
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very nice !!!
too much reverb on hats do, high part of bass line should be louder try to separate the bass line on 3 different channels and filter them separetly
down part of bass line is nice it self, very very chilout ish
but i like that
Finish it ,quick ! (and give us a shout to listen)
bless
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31-05-2009 20:31 |
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demure
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noice one for listening mate
will check out peoples tracks later on tonight
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31-05-2009 21:05 |
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Saikonutta
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It's a very nice track, the only thing i've missed is a bit of "stomp" in the beats. The sound (main mix, particularly beats) is a bit 'thin'. If you solve this, it would be perfect IMO.
cheerz
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07-06-2009 17:55 |
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demure
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haha i didnt want em to be too in ya face man i wanted something a bit different
cheers for listening though
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07-06-2009 20:28 |
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alternate force
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yeah lovely track mate , feelin this 1 alot
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would like to hear a reverbed clap or snare on every second snare , just to give it that dubstep feel , but its still great dubstep
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19-06-2009 20:15 |
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Sephiroth
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drum pattern is nice, liking that, great rasta-style samples throughout and the bass sounds cool too, some great automation and variations keep things interesting, only criticism would be too beef the drums a bit more, make em stand out more and sound more defined....great track tho, had my head noddin.....
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19-06-2009 22:14 |
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demure
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cheers mate
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