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Pytchlocka 
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Registration Date: 25-07-2008
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Please check out my new track 'The Dark Passenger' and post your comments here!
Hello all. damnn I've seriously been behind on reviews lately, time to stop this. 
Anyway, please dont be too harsh on this one, Ive just started it. Cheerz all !
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23-05-2009 06:14 |
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smifff
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 08-10-2006
Posts: 28
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Ideas sound too much like Donny, not being harsh or critical but there's not alot to go on.
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23-05-2009 06:54 |
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Gregg
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 16-05-2007
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Production quality is pretty good, high end is clear & clean, maybe even too sharp in parts.
I do like your intro with the hats and hits, the vocal is processed nicely as well. But you should deffo consider to shorten it a bit. I mean people want to hear music, and no speeches 
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Your one sub note is very low and quite inaudible, but I like the contrast between the low sub parts and the louder ones. Adds a fair amount of tension imo.
vary the synth that goes along with your sub when it comes to the finish product. It’s sorta static.
cheers!
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23-05-2009 10:54 |
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Andy Moore
Producer
Registration Date: 21-05-2009
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Playing now:
Sweet intro, nice and dark, good vocals too. The bass seems really in your face and crunchy, without being too overpowering.
The drums sound crisp and the arrangement is fine so far.
Definately looking forward to the finished article
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23-05-2009 19:17 |
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Subkinetik
Cupid Stunt
Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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that bass might sound better if you use a basic triangle wave (not saw) and boost the high end as much as you can. A lot of the top dnb producers use this technique to my knowledge. But at the moment it sounds too much like a high overly passed saw wave and doesnt sound good on the ears. Also that intro is too long. Try just taking quotes from that sample instead of using the whole thing.
Hope this helps
safe
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WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/SUBKINETIK
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24-05-2009 00:06 |
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Solitary
Newbie
Registration Date: 16-06-2009
Posts: 7
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Hmmm...i'm sure i've heard that snare before. Liked the sample at the beginning. Could do with a lot more build up before the drop...bass sounded alright. Kick could be a bit heavier.
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16-06-2009 12:50 |
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Zugzwang
Doin' it for the love
Registration Date: 13-05-2009
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Hey man, really filthy track I'm loving it.
Hats sound very crisp and at very appropriate levels. That snare sounds fucking sick, and I definitely love the direction this tune goes. Does sound a bit like Donny, but I don't think that's a bad thing.
I would personally like to hear a little bit more shuffle (maybe some short bursts of shuffle like in Donny - They Are Coming 
) but that's my personal taste.
Bigs ups mate!
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17-06-2009 09:17 |
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