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ObsidianDnB 
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Registration Date: 15-10-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Nocturnal Stigma' and post your comments here!
Been workin on this tune for a few weeks now. It's not done yet but I wanted to share it with the dotbe crew.
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18-05-2009 08:05 |
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Sephiroth
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id change the chord progression in the intro, sounds a little off....lots of variation throughout, nice to hear....bass sounds nice, could warm up the sub a bit, kick and snare could be a tad louder.....great little edits, i.e. 1:58, lots of these throughout that just break the rhythm for a moment, nicely done.....cool breakdown sections....all good but the pad just sounds a bit cheesy and preset-ish, give it some modulation + automation to make it more interesting....great stuff overall, lively drums and great edits throughout....good stuff!
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18-05-2009 20:34 |
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ObsidianDnB
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I actually tried something different with this tune. All the sounds, FX, Basslines, Subs.....etc I made from scratch using either 3xOSC or Massive. I made the kick and the snares using 3xOSC this way the transient is spot on and does not have to be normalized using soundforge.
Makin' Music is Awesome 
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19-05-2009 21:49 |
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cynik
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weird way to begin a tune, its different Ill give you that
too abrupt stop to otherwise cool rollage of the drums that follow. think you could drop the instrument from the intro way sooner
cool bass sound
it all sounds torn apart though, cant get a grip of what is the main part or melody in the tune
that and the way you change the various things around is confusing
cool fx and whatnots in the transitions
sounds good overall
keep at
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21-05-2009 00:40 |
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demure
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Registration Date: 22-01-2009
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cheers for the review on my tune mate i like this mate some nice atmos and little melodys the chords that come in around 45 sound out of key and i think the tune would benefit if you dropped em 
apart from that mate the sounds are really nice the midrange bass has a nice texture also and i like the bline in general i think it changes too much though would like to hear a more repetetive melody in there with it and maybe some more low mids too. drum pattern is original in the intro too i should point out i think you should have used that pattern right through the track mate
drops are generally ok but like i said would like more low mids in the bass as it is its a cool track original ideas man the drum pattern around 40 seconds is sick mate i love that i think the whole tune could benefit from it 
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21-05-2009 02:27 |
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Andy Moore
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Registration Date: 21-05-2009
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Playing now...
Very nice dreamy intro with a great build up. The overall drum sounds are really sharp and beefy.
Lots of nice production in here, sounds more than a few weeks work to me, very cool.
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23-05-2009 20:04 |
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