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18-05-2009 01:37 |
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Halph-Price
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... what the fuck, honestly. just hearing the start, the bassline is rolly, but it's a bit too boomy IMHO, in the low mids 200hz. that and you use the 707 sounds, which a good rule of thumb is about 1 or 2 per song, anything more sounds chesse. not good for evil songs. that opening synth, that's got stero spread, i'd try rasing it a whole octave. there's another bassline that sounds better, that gets lost with the stereo spread one. hugs and kisses. it's a really offbeat track.
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18-05-2009 08:46 |
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cynik
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well, not meant to be evil as per se, if you hear it that way what can I say. offbeat, Id take that as a compliment. I obliterated it with the izotopes hard bass compression. I know lots could be done about those blines
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18-05-2009 10:39 |
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wrm
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Not too wild about the synth. Sounds too warm, without any dirtyness, which in this case would be pretty useful. Beats edits are pretty good, but its missing some flow and rolling. At times when u layer those synths on each other it gets a bit messy imo. Try to separate (EQ) them better. Also it gets a bit repetitive after a while. Big ups for the edits in the break. The rest needs work imo. Another thing is, that this is not really my style of dnb track, so thats why I might sound a bit more critical.
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18-05-2009 12:04 |
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cynik
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18-05-2009 13:32 |
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liking the vocal sample.....drums sound a bit tooo messy imo, they need some sort of underlying rhythm to keep things going, sound too random, some nice choice of persussion tho...some cool little glitch edits in there, think the synth is no way near hard enough, not enough mid-range to cut through the drums....could use more variation too, gets a bit repetitive...
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18-05-2009 20:27 |
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ethex
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i think you use wrong snares on this one..
i mean those heavy metal ones..
overall : pretty scitzocynic ;D nice name for a album of yours haha
9p
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18-05-2009 22:49 |
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ObsidianDnB
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The beginning sounds a bit to all over the place. Not really my cup of tea. Mixdown sounds decent, I would make the kick stand out a bit more. Maybe modify the transient on it. Great use of vocals I like em'. Overall pretty good.
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19-05-2009 02:06 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by ethex
i think you use wrong snares on this one..
i mean those heavy metal ones..
overall : pretty scitzocynic ;D nice name for a album of yours haha
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yooo ethex good to see you man and thanks for the review
thanks to the others too - quality reviews with geniune points been made
anyone else?
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21-05-2009 11:50 |
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demure
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cool sample for starters haha 
its a little chaotic when it drops and im finding it hard to latch onto some thing, i thing the lead line is good, i just cant hear a kick clearly or a snare i think if you bring these out more it will help the tune some v good sounds but it needs something too latch onto imo. just a little chaotic man, i think if you bring them out more the tune will benefit loads and maybe the song structure will be a bit clearer too(imo of course) some good sounds though the lead synth and some fx in perticular were quality
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21-05-2009 14:05 |
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Tomos
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Full marks for programming, it's tight. I like the craziness of the beats. I'm not sure who they remind me of. Maybe Aphex Twin or NIN or somebody? Anyway, I enjoyed them. However, overall, this tune is lacking coherence. Some of the changes are a bit too random and there isn't a proper melody which is holding the vibe together. A bit too mechanical for me. Needs more groove, something you can bang your head to. The bass is too boomy I reckon. Needs to be tighter, a tad more distortion, a little less bass. Vocal samples are cool tho. The lyrical content works well with the vibe and they are crisp too. This one still needs work but there is enough quality material here to make a banging tune.
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