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Here is my latest neurofunk track. I think this is a big improvemet over my others. A producer named illsystemz wants to play my tracks like this one on his radio show. He says he has direct links to pro producers.
liking this intro, sounds crisp and eerie but that when the drums kick in u bring in a very unprocessed synth that sounds way too basic. try some distortion and maybe change up the waveforms. Play with it to make it unique.
This Neurosynth however, sounds awesome. May need some mastering however as the drums are kinda drowning it out. It also seems to get a little repetative tho as even though i can hear the subtle differences it still seems to get a little... boring maybe? i dunno if thats the word but u need to try and grip the listener throughout. Also maybe those drums could do with another hat in the high end as the hats uve currently got there do sit nicely but they arent apparent enough.
It is a good track and i can see it being played on radio like u say, but some minor improvement could bring it up to pro standard. im talkin noisia or evol intent here. U have the creativity and potential, just dont get lazy.
hope this helps
SAFE
direct links here we come...as i hear it...intro has got a good msyterious vibe. Drums come in nicely...nice and simple not to overstimulating. Like how the bass creaps in like that. Perhaps just a tiny bit of drum programming and variation. take that bing bing sound out in the dropor beef it up IMO. Really GREAT reece...how'd u do it...there a lot of movement on this one. Could use two synths parts cause it does get a tiny bit monotoneous. Other than that this is a good if not great tooooon. Mix sounds good...keep working
I love the intro and the concept of this tune. As Subkenetik said you need another hat on the drumz. Bring that high end up a little bit. Your neurofunk bassline is sick. I would add a dimension expander to it and boost the highs and mids a tad to make it pass through more. I think it will make it more effective. You also have some long lead-ins before the track drops. They are a little too long for me. Excellent tune though!
Before I review the tunage I want to say this: DON'T TRUST THIS ILLSYSTEMZ GUY. Get some proper proof or credentials to support what he says then negotiate deals with him. Too many producers get ripped cause of this shit. Don't let it happen to you.
Now for the song.. the neuro bass has too much mid/high. Bump the lows and lower the mids, it will make it sound so much crisper and the tune will come out more. The drums are ok... could be layered more but we can't have everything. Overall sick tune 4/5 man.
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yo guyz how you doing...just to let you know that i am illsystemz and i am real..lol......hey look i understand the situation with people that rip off tracks as i have just had major problems with this myself so i undersand how you feel....as for credentials.....you can tune in to me on originuk.net every wednesday from 6 - 8 uk time and we transmit on the fm frequency of 95.1.....one love people......illsystemz.....
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