 ObsidianDnB - Just Fight |
ObsidianDnB 
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Registration Date: 15-10-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Just Fight' and post your comments here!
This is a track I did a while ago. Just wanted to get everyones feedback. Let me know what you guys think! Enjoy!
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11-05-2009 19:19 |
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Gregg
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That one sample you used in your intro that sounds alike a low quality chor or somthing is quite out of place imo. The slide it does from note to note adds a cheap touch to it and makes it even worse. I’d ditch it.
That hit came with frooty didn’t it? Try to avoid the usage of those samples as they are possibly the most used samples ever and you normally just find them in shit tunes.
I like the bassline, funky programming. The sound could be slightly sharper, maybe more distortion or dist would be cool.
Drums are ok, nothing special tho. Kick and snare need to hit harder, the snare requires layering and a bit more presence in the high frequencies, kick could use a fatter bottom end.
I notice you have some bassline variation during the main parts but I’d also introduce another elements for more variation and kill some of the emptiness.
You can fatten up your buildups with longer swooshes.
Production quality is not bad. No noticeable frequency clashing but your hi end could be more defined.
Cheers!
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11-05-2009 21:42 |
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ObsidianDnB
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Thanks for the input. Since I made this tune I have more understanding about EQ'ing. I'm still trying to decide if this tune is worth going back and re-mastering.
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11-05-2009 21:46 |
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rez
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the bassline until 1:15 doesn't work at all with the rest of the track, sounds too off. the one after the drop is nice. i agree with gregg here, drums could have more punch, and the intro synth sounds bad :/ besides that, this track here is quite nice, likin it...
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11-05-2009 23:30 |
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drw89
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Fkin awesome intro. The kick is a bit too muffled, snare is fine though.
Drop is very nice. The rides/crashes have something nice, sound like they're played forward and backward everytime. (maybe they are 
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The bass sound is a bit too basic imo.
You need a decent kick with more punch.
I like the track, enjoyed listeing too it!
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14-05-2009 14:47 |
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