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alternate force alternate force is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Rush' and post your comments here!


hi , this is my new dubstep track , just got this signed today with another track , definately needs some tweekin and i know the arangment needs a bit more work , please let me know what can be improved , made on reason 4 !!!!!!

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by alternate force: 11-05-2009 19:09.

11-05-2009 13:50
Muad'Dib Muad'Dib is a male
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This ain't exactly a dnb,right? Sounding like breakbeat to me Big Grin

Anyways, great sounds, maybe a bit improvement with the snares. Great atmo in the tune. Definitely needs a better mixing and mastering, but overall, sounds ok.
Also, noticed that the whole tune is somewhat even, not much dynamical change in sound.

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11-05-2009 16:51 Homepage of Muad'Dib
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Wow, you got this signed and it still needs tweaking????
Needs some cleaning up indeed.

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12-05-2009 20:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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This track has a lot of potential! But I think I would EQ the wobble a bit different. Remove some highs and add some more mid body. Eventually some distortion too.

Also I think you could try to layer the snare with a higher, more distorted one, perhaps even a clap or use thor to create some pure noise on top of the snare.

But overall I really liked the track. When I would hear on a party, i would definately start rollin' some ganja! :-D

Greetz,
Vectrex

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15-05-2009 14:11 Homepage of Vectrex
Subkinetik Subkinetik is a male
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not too sure about that high end squelching sound on the intro but the rest seems fine. That horn is a little cliche tho. I have that sample myself from the hardnbouncysamplepack but i never use it for this reason.
That sub could sound better an actave lower, its not got that rumbling effect and in a club would probably drown all other frequencies out.
Definitely doesnt lack variation but its still a little subtle and could get boring after a while to ur average listener
Hope this helps
SAFE

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16-05-2009 13:14 Homepage of Subkinetik
Krisch Krisch is a male
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I llike the sub in the intro. But dont like those wobbling basses in this one. Man that horn sample really gets annoying after 2 seconds. The beats are too back in the mix you should turn them up a bit.
The whole tune needs better eqing (and mixing and mastering as MuadDib said Big Grin ).
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16-05-2009 20:46 Homepage of Krisch
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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ehhh its a little borring in the beginning. I like how the drums roll in as they do. Make that LFO dominant sounds more square IMO and get a tiny bit more movement on it and other things. It sound like some loops kinda. Overall sounds are quality... Im hearing a tiny bit of phasing and cancelation. Make sure everything is EQ'ed in its place. Good work and nice with the signage!

Riv

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17-05-2009 04:51 Homepage of Dethworm
Ketz Ketz is a male
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well ur on a roll now matey, glad to see ur getting ur stuff out there, mixdowns solid, onwards n upwards! Bigup

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24-05-2009 12:59 Homepage of Ketz
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