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Steppa
Registration Date: 21-07-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Subliminal Distorted' and post your comments here!!!
This track has been deleted. Reason: Old tracks removed
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26-03-2004 13:23 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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The breaks in this are really well programmed, very powerful and driving.
The first melody gets boring very quickly, better to kick it out and replace by something else...
Nice break at 1:47 real tension builder!!
I like the part between 3:33 and 4:16 most, when the staccato 1/8th note rising repeated sound is faded out (that sound is a bit grating too 
). This part is really good btw, makes the whole song!
You need to work on it a little longer, replace some of the sounds and melodies. Soundwise it's not bad, very hard compressed and very agressive, but that suits the style. Some sounds come in a bit too loud sometimes.
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26-03-2004 22:56 |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 21-07-2003
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Thx for the replies!
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| You need to work on it a little longer, replace some of the sounds and melodies. |
Yeah, I know. I just made it for the fun in fact, in one evening!
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27-03-2004 14:21 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good buildup
Good drums with enough power, tnx to the amen layered there I guess 
Good buildup to the drop
Drop works too, nice
Could use a bit more sub though, could sound fuller.
Quite good, altho I think this track will get me bored after hearing it a few times, the melody is quite repetetive.
3/5
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28-03-2004 10:58 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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those fast thingies at 1.02 don't fit so well me thinks !it's idd getiting 'huuu--uuuh''' after a while !
but you can make something with it!
here u really have to think about the crowd going crazy on ur song !!
make something fat of it!!
I'm sure u can do this with this one !
espcially with the amens! 
here there is a bit disturbance... 
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