drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » ObsidianDnB - Chronicle (finished) ObsidianDnB - Chronicle (finished) Author Post ObsidianDnB Producer Registration Date: 15-10-2008 Posts: 49 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Chronicle (finished)' and post your comments here! Thanks to everyone who commented on the preview version of this track. I have taken every comment into consideration. I have reprogrammed the drums, re-done the snare to pass through more. Added pads through the main bassline. And added the chillest sound Enjoy! www.myspace.com/ObsidianUS 05-05-2009 18:03 jared bryant Project Blubook Registration Date: 29-04-2009 Posts: 26 The rhythm seems to be a bit 'straight', especially with the kicks, try adding more shuffle to the programming. Certain synth sounds (& melodic loops) seem to conflict with each other. Effective snare sound, but drums would benefit from more double tempo loops (especially on the hats, shakers or congas). The arrangement seems a bit jerky, not really building upto a nice phat crescendo, more layers? Anyway, this is just my opinion. Jared B. www.myspace.com/bryantproductions. 11-05-2009 12:07 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » ObsidianDnB - Chronicle (finished)