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D.J.Tone-Def
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26-03-2004 02:16 |
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Surya
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Intro is good
Drop works
Nice hoover
Bassline sounds good too
Hoovering gets too loud sometimes, and the amen does need a boost, it's like in the background.
Nice use of the vocals
Don't really like the strings that come in towards the end, they don't really fit imo
Amen gets a bit boring too
Good but not great
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26-03-2004 11:22 |
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D.J.Tone-Def
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Cheers Surya.
I just had a go at the levels,drums especially,made a few adjustments and added a bit more compression.
Well it was meant to be sort of old school!
Remastered version still here;
http://www.musicv2.com/artist/djtonedef
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27-03-2004 00:43 |
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Airfull

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listening !
hmm pas mal pas mal..
strange feeling when im listening to it!!
it's like an alien coming into me
then a dog following me because he feels tha I'm an alien...
then a race into time
at the end, my ship is coming my way, and gone I am!
sorry for this explanation..that's how the song comes down on me!!
greetz!
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27-03-2004 10:46 |
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thechronic
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Originally posted by Airfull
listening !
hmm pas mal pas mal..
strange feeling when im listening to it!!
it's like an alien coming into me
then a dog following me because he feels tha I'm an alien...
then a race into time
at the end, my ship is coming my way, and gone I am!
sorry for this explanation..that's how the song comes down on me!!
greetz!
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LOL this gets the review of the year award from me
Most original description of a song buildup I ever read, and listening to the song I can follow it through, up to the point where you're laughing at the dog who stays behind on the planet looking upwards to your leaving ship
OK my own take...
The song is a bit weird, with a lot of elements coming in unexpected (like that short 'beep' sound that appears from time to time).
I like the beat in the second half of the song much better than the amen in the first half!!
Wouldn't it be a good idea to put the reeces of the first half also in the second half from time to time?
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28-03-2004 11:54 |
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D.J.Tone-Def
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Cheers Airfull!I'll have some of whatever you're having
Thanks also thechronic-I'll have another go at the tune later-this is just what I appreciate,constructive criticism and helpul suggestion!TA!
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28-03-2004 13:42 |
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machakil
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Originally posted by Airfull
listening !
hmm pas mal pas mal..
strange feeling when im listening to it!!
it's like an alien coming into me
then a dog following me because he feels tha I'm an alien...
then a race into time
at the end, my ship is coming my way, and gone I am!
sorry for this explanation..that's how the song comes down on me!!
greetz!
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LSD isn't healthy, girl
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28-03-2004 15:42 |
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Airfull

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I allready said sorry eh!!!!
tnx pieter!!
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28-03-2004 20:19 |
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