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ObsidianDnB 
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Registration Date: 15-10-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Chronicle' and post your comments here!
This track is a sum of everything I have learned until now. Hence the name "Chronicle"!
I modified the transient of the kick to make it come through a little better. I was quite pleased with the results.
Enjoy! Comments welcome.
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29-04-2009 02:49 |
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jared bryant
Project Blubook
Registration Date: 29-04-2009
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Solid Track! Build up is lackin a little in arrangement tho. Need to have some spread out breakdowns, with more dynamics, as in LOUD, QUIET, LOUD, Etc. Tell you wot tho, does remind me of tracks off 'Wormhole' by Ed Rush & Optical, which must be good. Bit more time spent on programming of the drums would go a long way tho. Sometimes the kick drowns out the snare a bit, try a bit more sidechaining, should sort it out!
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29-04-2009 14:24 |
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rez
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Registration Date: 15-04-2008
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cool glitchy sounds in the intro 
track has a different style from others, liking that! good stuff man, very nice choice of sounds overall. hmm i don't really like the snare that much, could be a bit crispier... or layered. sweet synths & bass, good job overall!
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29-04-2009 16:15 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Not bad at all, but the basslines could use a bit more groove at times and the whole thing gets repetitive after a while. Could do with some pads to fill out the spectrum.
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29-04-2009 23:29 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Some interesting ideas here. 
Quite refreshing actually to hear something so different. Sounds a bit robotic and one-dimensional at times though. Needs a bit more variation. Also, there are parts in this tune where it doesn't go anywhere, such as the intro. Seems a bit too random.
When it drops at 1.10 though the energy picks up and the tune starts to come together. Develops quite nicely from there onwards.
I'd love to hear a vocal in this somewhere. Perhaps something that sounds like a human-machine vocal, if you know what I mean.
Beats are very solid.
Good stuff mate, enjoyed.
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30-04-2009 21:10 |
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