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Registration Date: 01-04-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Substance' and post your comments here!

What do you think about this track?

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25-04-2009 21:19
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Liking the pad & lead sounds you have going on, but the structure
and the drums need some work. For example the snare needs some
low end punch.. Keep tweaking! Wink

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25-04-2009 22:09 Homepage of Puzzle
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dont like the club-ish kick. Snare is too weak and doesnt suit the style imo. Synth sounds too presety. Needs some low end. Try to EQ it more in the low-end (< 80Hz). Needs a lot of work. I like the sirene though Wink

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26-04-2009 00:48 Homepage of wrm
1and0
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Thanks for the comments so far.
Will work on that. Big Grin

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26-04-2009 11:58
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nice ideas but work more on the sound.

snare is too tinny, neews fattening it up. Id put an 909 snare on top to add meat, and eq more that metal can kind of sound

kick needs layers too, in fact all of your sounds need overhaul to filthen em up

bass needs power, lose the resonance and add distortion

but as I said the foundation is there so keep at it

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26-04-2009 14:08 Homepage of cynik
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Snaredrum is a bit too thin but this track sure contains good ideas and the kinda minimal vibe does work. I think you should avoid piano's though as they sound too dreamy for this down to earth style.
You manage to keep the flow going and keep things interesting. Track would benefit from a break being layered onto the drums at the second drop.

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26-04-2009 16:05 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Kick is far to loud. Think you need to find a better snare and use a few breaks to help it flow.

It is certainly original!

No offence, but I think you need to go back to the drawing board with this one. Sorry.

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27-04-2009 01:55
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agree with wrm the kick doesn't really suite dnb i'd look into maybe searchin for another sample/s, needs more filling up with the beat as well to keep it rolling / interesting

i do like the piano melody that comes in (and the siren hehe)

basically i'd look at jsut keep layerin this baby up until it sounds full, try A/B ur track with pro tracks to get a sense of what u need to acheive Bigup

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