pretty slamming...im starting to get your vibe...I really dont like the 4/4 slam rhythm, prefer it more funky but I like the idea. Really motivating. Could have more movement on that high freq lead type sound. Try some new drum sounds. The second drop is A LOT cooler and funkier. Try to shape your sound a little more as well as I can recognize that computer sound sample. More FX and atmos also. This one isnt done yet.
he song structure is pretty good, some of the synths sound cool too. As for the drums, I think that there could be more to the, I think the snare lack low end a bit. That gabber style kick is cool though.
I'm not so sure about the bass though, but the idea is really intersting to have it kinda how hard trance does it. Kick, Bass, Kick, Bass.
Awesome intro, like it a lot, sounds eerie just the way i like it however the vocal sample could be a lot clearer than it is and the meat of the tune needs some serious work, the whole thing just sounds like just a bunch of noise with no melody and almost gabberlike. sounds like something id only dance to if i was on pills, not good in my opinion, cant imagine it at a rave. I do however like the way uve tried to combine hardcore with a dnbish beat
so overall, like the intro, nice idea for the meat of the tune but not my cup of tea
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