 Sephiroth - Forgotten Tribe |
Sephiroth 
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Please check out my new track 'Forgotten Tribe' and post your comments here!
not finished yet, seems like its missing a vocal sample or something to gel it together, comments and criticism welcome!
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18-04-2009 16:16 |
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Ketz
Thinking outside the box...
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18-04-2009 16:38 |
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rez
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intro sounds pretty amazing yo, vocals can always find space in tunes... liking the drop man, nice bass & sub! yeah this is some very good stuff, don't see anything bad here... nice break & edits... well the only thing you need to work on is to bring more changes in the last couple mins, fuck i know its so hard to do... anyway, i really like this track man, very good stuff, looking forward to the final version! big ups!
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18-04-2009 16:41 |
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Krisch
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Wicked tune mate. I love it from the start to the end 
The intro is awesome. The drop as well. The basses are cool nice variations on them.
I also like the breakdown. Man you should make a breakbeat version of this one.
The 2nd part of the track is pretty the same as the first one. Its still not boring but if you could variate e.g. that wicked sub a bit it would be nice.
Overall i enjoyed it a lot nice tune
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18-04-2009 19:24 |
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m-ej
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ez m8e,
trademark sephiroth bbbrum de dum kicks :-P,
i love how loose your beats feel m8e,
twistly lil fercker rite here,
v schweet track could see meself bopping away in a lil dark club somewhere to this.
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18-04-2009 21:53 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
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Good work Seph! Drop is wicked...didnt expect that it would drop that hard...like the intro beat, nice groove. Drums need bringing forward. wohoooo...loving that breakbeat intermezzo...try to work more on the transition between the breakbeat part and the dnb part. The one u have there sounds too simple. Maybe u could squeeze some more from this man. Liking it so far...needs some work though, but its still a preview so I am looking forward to hearing the final product.
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18-04-2009 23:23 |
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Lightningflash
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nice but needs more elements
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19-04-2009 00:01 |
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dnbwhizzkid
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the beats sound nice and fast uve got a gud shuffle going a long aswell
the drop sounds quite good maybe a bit weak
but overall banging track
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19-04-2009 19:28 |
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demure
mastication fo de nation
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lovin the intro man heavy stuff cool sounds used for starters the drums in the intro are cool but need to be turned up imo. when it drops the midrange bass is very nice and the sub is solid too got a cool feel this track has, maybe the kick could be a little bit more defined but i reckon if the beats were louder would be spot on.as you have mentioned it does need something maybe some strings or something a nice pad even apart from that mate crackin sounds enjoyed this a lot
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20-04-2009 23:49 |
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ObsidianDnB
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Absolutely amazing! This track is dope. I love the bassline it's dark and heavy and has that modulation that keeps you listening. I think a deep male vocal would add some depth to your track for sure.There is also this weird little drum roll or something on the drums that just makes the drums sound a little off. Also the kick drum could punch a little more. The intro and the end are good. The mixdown sounds pretty good. It's a little long. I would reduce it to 5:30min. Actually listening to it again I could go for a little more of the bassline afterall it's pretty sick. The breakdown halfway through is awesome big ups on that.
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23-04-2009 21:35 |
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Subkinetik
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Nice track, definitely got it spot on with the into. had this track pumped right up, sounds really nice. I do, however think that reece needs to be tidied up a little due to the fact that its either not there most of the time or its too quiet and out of sync, and for me its the reece that makes a track like this work. Its used nicely on the breakbeat section though. maybe the second drop out of the breakbeat section could be a little more interesting than it is too.
Still, nice track, lovin what uve done here
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