your first dnb track here or overall?
well anyway, the mix is too muffled... needs to be mastered better. feels like im listening to a session from a basement
very nice vocal cuts around 2:35... the break is kinda off at some moments but not bad overall ... synth could need some other elements that follow (bass, reeces etc), tune is getting a little bit boring towards the end. but yeah, if this is your very first dnb track then im impressed
just keep working, doesn't matter if on this one or a new project, you'll always progress. keep it up
The snare could use alot of high end, kick could use less distortion and hihats should be brought more upfront. The reese could also be louder and you could put some effects to it.
Overall this sounds really good tho (considering that this is your first track).
but my first here.
I first tried out some Breakcore und tecno things but got bored with this style and never made a whole track then i really got intressted in the hard side of dnb and fell in love.
Yeah Mastering is really shitty got to work on my magical skills of mastering :-D
Thanks for critic, it´s the thing i can use the most now.
wanna improve my skills till im a god
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all too muffled , no mastering can put this tune right im afraid , dont know how u got the drums to sound that way , but dont do them that way again
, theres nothing clear in this mix , the only good thing i can say is that maybe if u got this tune to sound right it could be quite a good track , but as it is not .......
Did those drum samples initially sound that way or did you process them? If so, what did you do? maybe we can sort out the mistake(s).
If you haven’t processed them try always to take quality one shot samples or breaks. You won’t be able to make shit samples sound gold and you really don’t need to as there are quality ones everywhere to find (for instance in the samples section of this site).
Intro could do with a tad more action.
Kick is clipping (turn it down a bit).
Break should be eq-ed differently, it sounds lifeless now (hi-end seems to be cut off the drums).
If you are going for hard and dark then avoid melodies.
Breakdown is ok, stuttering bits are nice.
Lead synth isn't "shocking" enough for the style you are after IMO. Again melodies, (this makes it sound like happy hardcore). Around 3:50 you change for the better, more monotone hammering.
Listen to some tracks from Greyone, he knows how to do this style.
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15-04-2009 23:00
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The drums are a little bit to heavy on the volume, try turning them down a little bit. Otherwise I really like how they sound. Overall, the track is good, it kinda makes me wanna get off my seat and smack something =D But it could use some work on the build-up i think. Other than that it's a fun track. Could be interesting to see a little more diversified drum looping. Even so, I like it.
hmm soundss ok from the off when it drops needs work
hard to define certain sounds but i think i read somewhere that this is your first dnb tune if it is its a lot better than my first attempts lmao
andways just sort the mix out with eq and should have an alright track
just keep working, doesn't matter if on this one or a new project, you'll always progress. keep it up 
