drumnbass.be forum

drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Garfler - Punchline
Go to the bottom of this page Garfler - Punchline
Author
Post
Garfler Garfler is a male
Creature dnb


Registration Date: 11-02-2009
Posts: 20


Please check out my new track 'Punchline' and post your comments here!

First of all my artist name ain't Garfler, fuck Garfler, my real dnb name is Creature.
Here's another track. I wanted to make something progressive, I dunno if it's really that progressive, have a listen!
13-04-2009 16:59 Homepage of Garfler
1and0
|,,|, d-.-b |,,|


Registration Date: 01-04-2009
Posts: 22


Ok Ok never heard something like this.
Im usually into hard stuff but 1:07 got me groovin :-). I like the synths and breaks.
After the beginning the song gets a real chillout tune and this is why i think this song would only work mixed with an other tune at a party.
The whole sound seems like a real good idea to me.
You should stay a while with this style cause i think there can get some really nice and punchy party party tunes out of it.


__
My All Time Favs of da month:
Limewax - Icicle <3
Audio - Destroyed
Cyclone - Synopsis
13-04-2009 17:25
DamianHood DamianHood is a male
Damian Hood


Registration Date: 12-04-2009
Posts: 13


I have trouble with synthesizers intro's but yours is nice! How did you get the drums to sit in the background at the beginning? I like that..I also like the bassline that fades in..Not too sure what the synth that fades in after that is doing but taking us into the deep fires of the inner earth. I get a Mistabishi "White Collar Grime" feel for the drop but it's just not loud enough. That would be my first area of inspection..if you could get that part a little more defined we would have a big hit on our hands!! You might have written over a file when you bounced this one cause it sounds like the sound quality has been compromised! Otherwise, Great Work! ~Damian
13-04-2009 17:36 Homepage of DamianHood
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
2161... the future.


images/avatars/avatar-3255.jpg

Registration Date: 30-12-2005
Posts: 6,413

Helpfulness rating: 
40 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.70

Intro sure has then necesarry mystery going on.
When you stop the percussion I expected it to drop, but it didn't. OK, drop. Drums sound very much powerless and suffocated. Seems like you put in a lot of effort but you pulled them down too much, this is DNB, drums and bass should be really upfront. Breakdown builds up great, but the second drop is simply a disappointment. Wrong instrument, wrong pitch, compare this to any other tune and you'll notice it isn't working. Structure is gone too, jumps between various weird sections and ends in another breakdown (which itself is good) great buildup, but then again this sound which I can only describe as Dracula's funeral rave. Make only one breakdown, put all energy in there to build up again and make sure your second drop creates a dancefloor vibe. And don't make a 6:25 track, 3 or 4 minutes will do while learning.

__
Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
13-04-2009 18:02 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
Thinking outside the box...


images/avatars/avatar-2874.png

Registration Date: 10-10-2007
Posts: 2,865

Helpfulness rating: 
14 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.86

hey there, nice movie like strings in the intro really set the mood, although the wobble bass sound is panned to the right, i'd just centre that Happy

drop was nice but i think u could have built it up a bit more and also get the beat to punch thru more so the whole thing has more impact and drive, kick and snare sound pretty thin

1:50 synth is wicked, starts to get eerie when that comes in

not the most conventional of arrangements (intro, then drop then another drop less than a minute after) it is a tad confusing, seems to properly drop at around 3:00 which is too long really

bass are nice from there one, although like the beat they sound really muffled i'd try to focus on bringin those sounds out a lot more

some nice use of melodic fx type sounds are sweet tho i have to say Bigup

__



14-04-2009 18:12 Homepage of Ketz
junglist06 junglist06 is a male
Player


images/avatars/avatar-2586.jpg

Registration Date: 12-09-2006
Posts: 310

Helpfulness rating: 
2 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

intros cool, like the percusion that you bring in it, original tune, not really heard much like it, not my style but its still kinda cool. the break deffinately needs bringing out, sounds a bit weak, especially the snare, i would think that a phatter layer would really help

__
aka D-Man.....salute the junglist general
15-04-2009 21:32
Garfler Garfler is a male
Creature dnb


Registration Date: 11-02-2009
Posts: 20


shit, i didn't know the wobble was panned, sorry for that :S Maybe something wrong with the upload system here dunno cause it should be in the middle Tongue I totally agree that the tune is sorta messy, I still need to work on mah structure.

KEEP IT REAL KEEP IT ROLLIN Drummer

hehe
16-04-2009 16:35 Homepage of Garfler
drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Garfler - Punchline