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alternate force alternate force is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Dubstar' and post your comments here!

hi there , time4 some dubstepy chillout / bukemy vibes now , my new track made on reason 4 , pretty happy with it , but if anything needs changing please let me know !!!!

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07-04-2009 20:45
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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Gotta admit I have been getting really into the Dubstep vibe. Intro sounds are a bit canned and typical, nothing I haven't heard before. Need more FX's and delayed stabs to keep the listeners attention. Kick needs to have more release on it IMO and it really needs a super sub bass throughout the whole track that makes me wanna bob my head. Rhoades sounds cool and mellow. Def a mellow chilling vibe with a nice smooth atmos. Nice vocal sample. Sound are good it just really needs more BASS!! and a different kick drum IMO. mix sounds good except mabey bring the rhoades more into the backround.

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08-04-2009 00:06 Homepage of Dethworm
drw89 drw89 is a male
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Intro strings give me the creeps, awesome.
Drums sound realllllly chill.
Wow, this has a really fkin good vibe dude, this is the ultimate E track if you know what i mean Wink .
4 Minutes have passed now and i have not been bored 1 second, never had that with other tracks here before!
The buildown is greatly done also.
Really if i could give you 20/10 i would man, big up!

Btw, what does he say in the sample? I understand "Één April" (April 1st in dutch)


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08-04-2009 19:19
alternate force alternate force is a male
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Intro strings give me the creeps, awesome.
Drums sound realllllly chill.
Wow, this has a really fkin good vibe dude, this is the ultimate E track if you know what i mean Wink .
4 Minutes have passed now and i have not been bored 1 second, never had that with other tracks here before!
The buildown is greatly done also.
Really if i could give you 20/10 i would man, big up!

Btw, what does he say in the sample? I understand "Één April" (April 1st in dutch)


thanks mate , thats really nice of u to say , appreciate that , cheers mate , peace Smile !!!!!

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08-04-2009 19:32
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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The main kick is damn impressive, but it sounds as if it is clipping (not 100% sure though) but it does sound a bit overpuchy on the ears, atleast it doesn't take out the other elements which is good.
Really chilly atmosphere, love the flute sparse touch (instant relax). Towards the middle of the tune some sax element is being added, this sounds a bit thin and digital (might do better with a touch of chorus).
Like the overall vibe of the track, sounds really pro.

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10-04-2009 12:00 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hey dude, really feelin the intro, almost reminds me of a teebee tune for just that split second Big Grin

i see what BD is sayin kick is clippin a little bit maybe just tame it down a notch

sub is comin thru sweet, airy pads / vox all fit the vibe really well

real nice chiilll number here man good work Bigup

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11-04-2009 14:29 Homepage of Ketz
vinta9e vinta9e is a male
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this one got a lovely vibe - i mean - there is a lot of atmosphere in the intro before 1:30... and then it just blooms!

i can't resist the feeling though that the kick is slightly too strong - sounds like a
dnb-type-peak@100Hz-dancefloor-mover. it disturbs the mix slightly in my opinion but i guess it could be fixed in the mastering stage, too.

the tension built up in the intro, and the overall atmosphere are this tune's strongest points. despite the slightly strident kick, i find the tune still being highly enjoyable.

well done, AF!
12-04-2009 09:45
Krisch Krisch is a male
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Yeah wicked track here. The intro is cool. It has a nice atmosphere. I really love the melodies in this one. I also think that the kick is too loud and maybe you should find another sample. You used the vocals too much times imo. In this case less could be more.
Btw its a sweet tune with nice chilled vibeBigup
12-04-2009 22:51 Homepage of Krisch
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Intro sounds more like a file score! Not complaining though Happy

Ya snare isn't hard enough and ya kick is pitched way to high.

The vocal has been used so many times, I would advise finding something different.

Like the Rhodes sound. Very nice.

The track needs a hook really, it just drifts along and doesn't make me feel like I'm on a journey. Don't get me wrong, there are some nice element here though.

Notice you have repitched the kick in the second half. A lot better. The vocal is getting real annoying now.

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13-04-2009 06:25
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