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Gregg 
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The overall sound is ok, no big issues. Drums are good and the sub is quite fat.
I don’t like most of the elements in here though. They are mostly monotonous and annoying, especially the number-typing-into-a-phone alike sound and the high pitch shifting one. I’d just leave them out or at least use them less often as they seem to have nothing positive to em, like sounding interesting, quality or refreshing.
The low cut that appears from time to time was a bit irritating maybe do it more obvious and on more special places (drop, buildup..).
Peace!
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wrm
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Ok...to be really honest...its sucks...sorry, but you have chosen the most iritated and disharmonic sounds that you possibly could choose. I had to turn it off otherwise my head would blow. Some elements are off the tempo (telephone, vocals) and it spoils the vibe. The beat is not that bad actually (besides that left panned snare). Sub is good aswell. But those other sounds...man...also, the track is just repeating itself. Drop some changes here and there to make it more interesting (filtering just isnt enough in this case)...hope it helps
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07-04-2009 19:25 |
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BattleDrone
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Panned basses = bad idea. Extreme panned elements is always a bad idea.
Vocals get on my nerves after a while.
Track has potential, but the structure should be different. The bleeps that are introduced right at the start don't fit imo and they get louder in a chaotic way (to me atleast).
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07-04-2009 19:53 |
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07-04-2009 20:21 |
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Uberchile
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vocal gets really annoying
to many out of time blips and noises for me.
beats and bass are good but just repeat, needs alot of variation and the vocal is really annoying.
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09-04-2009 12:41 |
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Krisch
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Sorry mate but i couldnt listen to it from the start to the end its that annoying.
You have pretty nice basics the beats and the sub are good. But tbh i'd throw out (and forget) all of the other elements and start a new track.
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12-04-2009 22:33 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Maybe mess around with the pitch on the sample, get a bit tedious after a while.
Ya drums: Your hat is to loud. In fact, it seem louder than your snare.
Your bass is to weak and lacks power, also, it is panned one side. Not good!
Quite like the beeps. 
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