Please check out my new track 'Unknown' and post your comments here!
EZ , 9 months since I last posted up a track, had some time out. Anyway back on it still with Reason4 made 90% of samples myself using thor.. check it out see what you think! Aint though of no names yet im gonna use the best name I think matches the track so I need some ideas from the be. heads, what you reckon?
like this one! snare sounds a little dry tho, needs a high end snare on top imo, really feeling that riff, intro could do with some more stuff adding to it
Love the way the beat comes straight in at the begining. i think its good the way you broke the tune up with a build up to bring the beat back in again. like at 1.40. Not to keen on the bass part of the tune thoe, the part where you break it down at about 3 mins in with the pad in the backround.
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that vocal esque sound is annoying to me but I am really critical of sound design. Drum is too much of a loop man needs to vary up every measure. Drop is uninspiring and abrupt needs much more atmosphere building and sound FX. Sound like an idea that needs a lot more work before it can be considered a tune. The mix isnt bad tho and I will have to admit it took me quite a while to get Reason to export anything sounding this good. The germ is there and the vibe is definitly rolling it just need like 8 more hours of fiddling and movement and editing and stuff like that to really fill it out bro. Keep it up.
Intro sounds a bit Zelda like to me.
Drop is awesome
. This is the better jump-up m8.
It's got a certain cheese factor but in a very good way (can't explain it).
Second drop @ 1:50 is even more awesome.
After the awesomeness, @ around 4:00 it gets a bit repetitive, try adding some other elements there too.
i like the minimalist approach here: the song's groove "breathes" meaning you can easily separate every sound in it.
the drum beat with the kick on downbeat... great idea, really engaging.
the structure is very well done too: its basically the same thing over and over... but it does not become boring which means the arrangement is clever and works.
to sum up: maybe though not extremely innovative, it makes me wanna move mwah feet.
a good tune is more than sum of its parts; this is the case.
nice tune, my style of dnb.... like a few people have said, the intro needs a bit more attention, it could do with more tension and energy, then when it drops.... BO!!!! apart from that a little more variation on your beats, and i would say more importantly on your bass as it does get a little bit repetative. All in all, a wicked tune, would deffo buy this one. nice one bro
Originally posted by junglist06
nice tune, my style of dnb.... like a few people have said, the intro needs a bit more attention, it could do with more tension and energy, then when it drops.... BO!!!! apart from that a little more variation on your beats, and i would say more importantly on your bass as it does get a little bit repetative. All in all, a wicked tune, would deffo buy this one. nice one bro
. This is the better jump-up m8.
