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m-ej 
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Please check out my new track 'Shadowlands (update)' and post your comments here!
ez chaps.
ok iv taken on board a lot of whats been said about this track.
iv made a lot of changes so.
@binary havoc.
iv changed the kicks, snares.
@battle drone.
things have been crisped up and eq'd.
@alternate force.
iv shorten the intro to 1 minute.
@cynic.
iv added more high end as stated.im happy with the drop now 
.removed the drum chops
(gotta say big thanks to ketz and techlogic for lending your ears)
so the chaps any more thoughts?
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04-04-2009 17:52 |
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Lightningflash
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like those pads but not to keen on the drum patten
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04-04-2009 23:31 |
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m-ej
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cheers m8,
like i said in the 1st post,
its not gonna be everyones liking.
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04-04-2009 23:45 |
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Uberchile
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woaaah that sub is deep in my head phones 
Nice track snare sounds a bit splashy for my taste
Nice melodies, only real problem is I seem to get lost in the track. there isnt a great deal of structure or defined sections I can pick up on.
nice at 5:00 ish likin the Amen shifing breaks
getting more used to the snare now but it sounded a bit alien at the beggining.
Ends quite suddenly(i would reduce some of the layers gradually to make a thinner texture before ending)
Thanks for the listen
UC
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05-04-2009 23:09 |
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m-ej
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cheers uc.
yeah i got lost with the ending
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06-04-2009 00:26 |
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Gregg
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Hey!
Nice elements and atmosphere in here.
Not to keen on the drums either. Their flow is generally ok but they are a bit undefined and powerless. Kick is a too boomy but that’s quite a personal thing.
I think your highs are boosted too much. They sound unnatural and even a bit unpleasant. There also seems to be a small lack of mids!? Anyways, try to improve your mix and the overall eq a bit.
Not bad.
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06-04-2009 20:01 |
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drw89
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I think the kick is too much "Oof...Oof"
I like the snare though.
After the intro, the bit for the break is really spacy, i like it. What synth u used there?
I like the drop but i think the kick ruins it for me, it reminds me a bit of Super mario --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qa7DjB6IVmM
but do you get what i mean?
Other people may like it it could just be me!
You got some nice synth works going through your track though, i like this style.
The bit with the amen @ 4:47 owns !!!
Try changing your kick (if im not the only one saying this ofcourse).
Further on nice track man!
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08-04-2009 21:06 |
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m-ej
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cheers m8 glad to get some positive feedback for a change
yeah can change the kick no worries.
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