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drw89 
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Registration Date: 26-01-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!
After my last track i took a little break with producing.
This is my last track i made since then.
Started this morning, far from finished but since i am a little stuck i could use some tips!
Enjoy!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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04-04-2009 17:03 |
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drw89
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ok, i uploaded the wrong versi
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04-04-2009 17:08 |
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Uberchile
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Liking the intro melodies and two step. It goes nicely. Sub is nice in head phones.
the synth at 1:10 doesnt fit imo
Nice filtered bass. sub could be tweaked a bit to rise over the filterd bass towards every 8 or 16 bars.
melodies could use a more prominent change getting a tad repetitive.
Synth at 2:45 is a bit too wobbly on the pitch imo is distorting the whole melodic feel to the track.
I would have dropped it when the pad came in or lowered the frequncy. likin the new melody tho. bass line could use switch ups and rolls would go niely in the beats.
sounds a bit out of tune at 4:30.
ends ok... could swirl out with those fx you used towards the beggining and have a delay to give a windy effect. thats just what i would do tho.
i like this, nice melodies just needs a bit of variation as drums and bassline get a bit repetative towards the end of the track. Tweak some of the synths and this will be very good.
thanks for the listen
UC
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05-04-2009 23:16 |
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Uberchile
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ha...well i reviewed that version...
didnt read existing reviews....
UC
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05-04-2009 23:18 |
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alternate force
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ez mate , thanks 4 the kind wordz on my last tune 
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well , at the begining the beats sound nice but quite flat and u need to have a bit of variation on the kiks n hatz !! nice ideas all round , some of the synths r a bit to loud 4 the track thou , yeah again as the track progresses it still needs those variations in the beats , something that i never used to do with my tunes but its something u learn to do more as ur production skills improve and when us folks keep asking u to do it
, it will come !!!
like it , to be improved thou
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08-04-2009 21:43 |
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drw89
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Yo thanks for the review m8 but this is my emptiest version, it was my first sketch for the lay-out.
I asked the admins to remove this track so i could upload the good version, didnt happen yet!
So thanks for the review but i need it more on my next one 
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08-04-2009 21:47 |
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