drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Garfler - The Clownfart Garfler - The Clownfart Author Post Garfler Creature dnb Registration Date: 11-02-2009 Posts: 20 Please check out my new track 'The Clownfart' and post your comments here! Jump Up(ish) track I made on FL Studio 8 a while ago, very subby. Took about a week to finnish, I really learned a lot by making it. Some subby basses I made using sytrus, the mid - high range basses are just samples. Nowadays I use sytrus for everything though. I also used a lot of maximus in it, especially on the drums. 01-04-2009 17:57 rez Wicked Producer Registration Date: 15-04-2008 Posts: 333 Helpfulness rating:  funny intro... lot of weird stuff & fx going on in this track, very crazy... the snare needs to be worked over though, doesn't "snap" enough... don't know, i'm not a big jumpup fan... but you sure have skill, cool sounds in this track... it just all seems a bit too random :o __ o_O 01-04-2009 19:52 Garfler Creature dnb Registration Date: 11-02-2009 Posts: 20 random is kinda my style u know!!! A lot of new tunes coming up soon though so stay tuned for more, too bad I can only post 1 track per 5 days... 01-04-2009 20:08 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Kick kan hardly be heard, snare is extremely muffled, ghostbit of the break too. The Adams family lead doesn't fit. Those rides are too loud and undefined. Track needs a more clear structure and a bassline that is at least an octave higher. Needs a lot of work. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 01-04-2009 21:44 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  ez there man some good ideas here, proper bouncey number! although the mix needs some attention, kick definately needs bringing forward, boost it and layer it with somethin more punchy so it cuts thru better could fill it up in sections more (around 2:40 onwards it starts sounding a bit empty) not bad man, keep workin on it __ 01-04-2009 23:09 drw89 Sponsor Registration Date: 26-01-2009 Posts: 105 Helpfulness rating:  Intro sounds cute, but the synthy thing gets annoying quite fast. The bassdrum and snares need work, i can't even hear the bassdrum most of the time and the snare is vague. Everything sounds like it's been cut off @ 7k hz. Also put a little structure in the track. There is good stuff too, but try to work on these points. Sincerely DRW __ . 06-04-2009 17:34 CULTURE BOY v v v iv a record missing Registration Date: 12-01-2007 Posts: 1,415 Helpfulness rating:  beats need sorting out a lot, the spacey rides sound nice but that about all mate, get layering some nice snares n kicks __ www.myspace.com/cultureboydnb soundcloud 06-04-2009 20:43 Dethworm Cymatics Registration Date: 11-01-2009 Posts: 332 Helpfulness rating:  I like the soundvibe scape. Sound like Mario 64 gone wacky. The drums are barely audible and this track needs alot of EQing and mixing until it will sound good. Sounds like a real fart at this point. Good sound design tho and the basses do sound cool. Just learn about mixing and shit like that in order to get it to sound loud and good. __ www.soundcloud.com/riveraccorsi 08-04-2009 00:13 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Garfler - The Clownfart