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DJ BZ DJ BZ is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Laptop Sugar' and post your comments here!

still working on this track, sounding ok so far, still have a long way to go, just wanted to see what people thought and maybe what i could do to improve it.

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28-03-2009 02:35
alternate force alternate force is a male
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oh yeah HEAVY Smile , like it man nice , nice ideas , would like to hear a nice dark vocal and a nice uplift effect on the drop , need loads of variations , but im sure ull put them in later , like , sweet Smile !!!

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28-03-2009 15:24
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Tasty reeses man!

Sounds really good otherwise, but could use a lot more variations and effects/pads in my opinion.

Keep working on it. Drummer

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28-03-2009 20:06 Homepage of Puzzle
cynik cynik is a male
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menacing intro

you do like that reverse sound do you

drop could be accentuated more. the drums could use more release

it doesnt evolve much though, a lot could be done to modulate the bass or replace the sound at times

mean sounding bass tho! Devil

sounds promissing, keep working it

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29-03-2009 10:34 Homepage of cynik
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Bassline could be a tad more interesting with extra elements. Mixdown could do with more hi-end, it all sounds somewhat muffled now.

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30-03-2009 12:03 Homepage of BattleDrone
DJ BZ DJ BZ is a male
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thanks for listening guys, everything taken on board, still got alot to do to it, so appreciate the feedback

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31-03-2009 23:13
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punchy drums that sound cool some nice fx work too nice bass i think its a little loud though kinda drowning out the drums a bit matey i like it all the same though man maybe a bit more hi end action wouldnt go a miss either mate. some nice sounds used though i especially like the fx though man they are cool and really help the track roll. it does get a bit repetetive though man and does need more in the way of change ups cool track though
01-04-2009 00:07
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nice and demonic intro with some wacky nasty vibe. Mabey a few more FX and atmosphere. Drums sound really nice and thick. THICK BASS!I would hi pass filter the bass and then bring the bass in when the "drop" hits. You need more of a drop and then another or two breaks ripping along for sure. Also vary the bass line and put a delay on that beep sound. Sound pretty fukn cool tho man. Id say its like 65 percent done. Keep it up! PEace

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01-04-2009 16:12 Homepage of Dethworm
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez man, nice beat amen with punchy snare, bass sounds very menacing indeed when it comes in as has been said

haha damn that bass really does growl when its dropped - good work!! what did u use for the reece? i really do like the texture to it


in terms of suggestions (as i know ur still workin on it), some more eerie fx to fill things out and build on the vibe u got goin, a few more edits on the beat wouldn't hurt either Wink

i'd defo say ur onto a winner here man, really feelin it! Rinse

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01-04-2009 23:30 Homepage of Ketz
Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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HH could stand out a bit, drums sound to much like old vinyl loops to me, add some one shots in there,
got potential though

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