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m-ej m-ej is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Shadowlands' and post your comments here!

ez dotbe.
this is my very 1st upload on here so im not expecting too much, i know its not gonna be to everyones taste.
the beats are in sx3 and the midi is in ableton live7(just because im finding the midi side of sx a nudgery and finickey, or to put it in plain english, "a pain in the arse").
its a bit of a trippy bleepfest going on, and would properly sound better if you dropped a few dancing smarties(but then everything sounds better on smarties right),
im currently bouncing all the midi to sx for some more fiddling with.
so then any thoughts guys?

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27-03-2009 13:04
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hey marc Big Grin glad u finally uploaded somethin on here Bigup well i've heard this one before and i think u've done a really good job on this

lol @ dancing smarties ROFL

won't go into detailed review as u know what i think of it Bigup keep em comin!

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cheers ketan m8.
im getting there(i think)

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27-03-2009 14:43
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Ez Marc

Tis indeed about time you put a tune up here

I like the drum pattern but Im not in love with some of the drum sounds....reckon the kick is a little boomy and the snare a little reverby????

Really liked that heavily fxed synth that comes in around 1:40...that and some of the techno / electro hits reminded me of some of cynatifics stuff from a couple of years back .....which is a good thing imo btw

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27-03-2009 15:04 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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ok bh m8 all can be redone no probs sir.
the beat started off titled as "bouncey lil fucker" because they were bouncing around the headphones on a lil 8bar.
im not sure where the reverb snare came from as there is no reverb on the snares at all, just eq.
so it could be down to my sample selection
but as i said it can be redone.

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27-03-2009 15:38
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The beats should be more crispy (hi end on kick and snare) the kick has too much sub.
Tune could be EQed much better.
Avoid wild panning stuff.
Mixdown needs more hi-end.
Not bad for a first track.

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27-03-2009 15:56 Homepage of BattleDrone
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cheers bd m8, notes taken bro

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27-03-2009 16:20
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Very nice track, me likes. Big Grin

Great soundscapes. Bigup

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hi there , well nice tune , but the kik is too powerful needs the low end turning down , the beats sound a bit muffled , alot of the different beats r all over eq`ed and to heavy 4 me !!!!

nice over all , i thing the intro should be 1 min instead of 1:30 !!


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28-03-2009 15:31
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ez man i heard this before but i gotta say again some really nice sounds used man sounds like the kick been neatend up too to me and its all sounding very nice indeed. u already got my review on everything else man wicked tune
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cheers chaps,
im re-doing the kicks(yeah one of them is sub heavy as stated)
and yes there is a reverby snare, which will be changed.
update soon Smile

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28-03-2009 22:12
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strange sounding shakers right off. the drums could use more high end

nice little lull at the second minute although it took a while to get going. like the sound of that lead.

for this kind of tune I reckon the drop should be emphasized a lot more, you instead bring back the intro business with that new bass.

sorry man but I dont feel it really goes anywhere; doesnt progress from the intro much, dont think the drum chops later on suit the tune either

Im liking the vibes but this needs a lot more.

keep at it

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29-03-2009 10:24 Homepage of cynik
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cheers m8e,
will do.

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29-03-2009 10:43
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update of shadowlands.
ez chaps,
iv taken on board whats been said.
so iv changed the kick,snare,hats,shakers,
chopped it back to 1minute,got rid of the beat edits, new bassline is added along with some fx's,
its still a bleepy lil thing .
so any thoughts Smile
(its on the shitespace player).

www.myspace.com/soapyrecordings

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02-04-2009 10:33
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