Please check out my new track 'Ave' and post your comments here!
hello bros and sistas of da beats, take a break for some LIVE loop mix full of trix , hhh ...
ave ..
it's very minimalistic I would say, but all sound is fully synthesizerized, so any comments around sound will be really appreciated, I lost one high amplifier, so I'm working in mono nowadays.. eh..
keep rolling bros and sistas!!
peace
I'm really sorry about your ears, I didn't want to hurt u, hhh, thanx for your comnts bros, I'll give some more energy into this piece...
respect, jamal!
funky lyrics..you make those yourself? REECES PIECES...mmm ET. I like the minimalistic less really is always MORE. Sound more like a raving piece with those organ type sounds and sine bass. Still needs like 15 times variation and detail. THe skeleton is there but you need to make this more than just some loops going together. Sounds are def good tho and Im loving that bell type sound. the drop out is reall funky and cool like how the drums jsut roll back in...the lyric gets lame after a while. THat little FM synth stab sound is really funky but needs a tiny bit more movement. Dont let the lyric hold u back...THIS NEEDS TO EXPLODE with a THICK and menacing second break man. More variation and more drum programming and some detail and movement in the synth sounds. Also go easy on that vocal can get cheesy at times... Almost done G
ou ya man, u got it, for me it's maximal minimal, as well.., lyrics r from unknown master but I like his flow and with time stretching I made it fits there like ass to trousers for me, I put much energy into theese few channels, 9 sounds? hh , but it looks that some more line is definitly needed, hehe... good
thanx
Am listening on laptop speakers so can't really comment on the sound.
The vocals are nice but they are too fast, they run ahead of the music. You can solve this with editing, but maybe that goes against the 'live' intention.
The structure is long-winded, you made a long track which has just a little bit of variation in it. It starts to get boring after a while. Try making a very different break to put somewhere in the track.
Did you use ableton to make it?
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hello man, thankx for commnt, for me vocal is ok, it's not original tempo, that's how I like it, some people think that it doesn't fit in there, some do..
I'll try to make it more colourful
for my production i use fruity loops studio with midi controler.. so my stuff is me and 16 knobs rolling till the end, hehehe
ez there man, likin the hiphop accapella
beat sounds ok, is a bit too minimal for my likin, could fit a lot more in there and beef it up as well, get some more edits in there as well
vocal sounds very slightly out of time at points..
sounds a lot better with the bass action around 2:50 onwards, i would maybe bring this in earlier as u lose a bit of momentum in that breakdown section
thanx
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