drumnbass.be forum

drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » wrm - Dont Cry
Go to the bottom of this page wrm - Dont Cry
Author
Post
wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental


images/avatars/avatar-2659.jpg

Registration Date: 13-09-2006
Posts: 465

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

Please check out my new track 'Dont Cry' and post your comments here!

Something I started this morning. Sounds promising to me so far. Any ideas on this part? Thanks


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

__
___ Visit MYspace ___
09-03-2009 18:31 Homepage of wrm
demure demure is a male
mastication fo de nation


images/avatars/avatar-2837.jpeg

Registration Date: 22-01-2009
Posts: 921

Helpfulness rating: 
2 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

ez man pretty sparse intro to begin with but some nice sounds comin although they sound a bit random. when it drops it sounding a bit crazy mate and i dont think those piano hits are doing the track any favor sound a bit outa place to me maybe off key even but the beats are solid (mmaybe the shuffle could do with some more midrange) but that just a small issue really good idea though man
09-03-2009 18:53
Puzzle Puzzle is a male
..zebra?


images/avatars/avatar-2746.gif

Registration Date: 27-05-2008
Posts: 724

Helpfulness rating: 
9 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.67

Drums sounding solid. The first bass at the drop is maybe a bit too loud, everything else is good. Just do something with that baby-sample. Sounds pretty horrible. Big Grin

__
SoundCloud
Facebook
YouTube
10-03-2009 11:44 Homepage of Puzzle
wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental


images/avatars/avatar-2659.jpg

Registration Date: 13-09-2006
Posts: 465

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

thanks guys...i made a pretty big step forward with the track so far...I will upload the final version asap

2 puzzle: nope dude, child screaming stays...i love it :-D

__
___ Visit MYspace ___
10-03-2009 12:42 Homepage of wrm
Ketz Ketz is a male
Thinking outside the box...


images/avatars/avatar-2874.png

Registration Date: 10-10-2007
Posts: 2,865

Helpfulness rating: 
14 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.86

aah heard this one already Big Grin u got my review mate wicked choon Bigup

__



10-03-2009 14:45 Homepage of Ketz
alternate force alternate force is a male
Cool Producer


Registration Date: 23-01-2009
Posts: 215

Helpfulness rating: 
4 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.50

yeah i agree with the first 2 reviews , the drop is abit confusing , not too much thou , i think it is cus uve left that piano sample in there , take that out i think , the beats sound crisp , nice !!

__
http://www.myspace.com/dubkinetik


10-03-2009 15:47
xevex
Producer


Registration Date: 06-08-2007
Posts: 45


this tune is cool. mix n quality are good on my end (sub a little quiet) def don't take out the piano from the drop. i don't really like the high scissor snip hi hat sound in the intro but the panning is cool. love the jazz guitar n piano sounds. bass very simple but works. keep up the good work soldier Drummer
10-03-2009 21:52
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
Cymatics


images/avatars/avatar-2734.jpg

Registration Date: 11-01-2009
Posts: 332

Helpfulness rating: 
3 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 6.33

Nice drum programming...The square synth doesn't blow my skirt up could use a bit more tweaking to get it to really sit right in the mix. Wah guitar sound and other piano samples sound cool. Baby crying adds a wacky vibe but I think you could make it more unrecognizable. The drop also need to hit harder...take a little more time to stress it with minimalism. Bass sounds great nice and PHAT. Over the mix is tight and good choice of sounds. I'd say it still need some little tricks and twists and more tweaking to get it just right.

__


www.soundcloud.com/riveraccorsi
13-03-2009 05:47 Homepage of Dethworm
organic.
Producer


images/avatars/avatar-2747.gif

Registration Date: 01-02-2009
Posts: 95

Helpfulness rating: 
3 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 2.33

ou ya man, no comment, nice rolling vibe, wanna hear it loud!!!! recpect, dramabassa rulezzzz!!!

__
when I'm stoned I'm thinking in music ....

http://www.myspace.com/organic.live
16-03-2009 01:55
D2o D2o is a male
Ghost


images/avatars/avatar-1834.gif

Registration Date: 30-05-2005
Posts: 2,545

Helpfulness rating: 
19 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.74

Drums sound all right from the off. Although kikc is a little loud compared to the rest imo

That break down and drop is plain odd.

Just sounds out of tune and messy making it quite hard to listen too.

Sounds better at 2.13 when some sounds drop out but that piano just doesn't sound right imo

__
WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/VOLATILE-PSYCLE

16-03-2009 10:16 Homepage of D2o
drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » wrm - Dont Cry