 xevex - The Future |
xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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Please check out my new track 'The Future' and post your comments here!
not near finished, 1.5 hrs in, barely any intro or structure use fl8 mostly just the stuff that it came with. any comments welcome, especially detail about eqing and mix because my monitor situation isn't right peace.
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03-03-2009 03:26 |
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Sozai 
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Registration Date: 27-01-2008
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Hey dude! This tune has lots of promise, thou it did start to get a little repetitive after a little while. I'm always a fan of tunes with lots of the amen coming through, thou i reckon you just need to chop and change it up little for some variation. Also and to do it a little with the synths and bass.
With the mix its actually not too bad. just keep plugging away at making tunes man!
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03-03-2009 10:30 |
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drw89
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Registration Date: 26-01-2009
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The track begins with some nice breaks, but after that i find the bassline quite irritating. After 1:30 it begins to irritate me a bit. It's way to repetitive for me and there is no end. About EQ'ing, i don't have any monitors yet so thats not up to me to judge.
This track could turn in something good but you really have to work alot on it!
Sincerely, DRW!
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03-03-2009 11:52 |
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Tomos
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Lots of good aspects to this tune - love the amen breaks, the production quality is very tight, the structure is basic and solid, bass melodies are good too. But it does get too repetitive. Even if you just gave the basslines some slight variations, that woud definitely help break it up a little. Also, I reckon you should try beefing up the amens. Maybe put them through a compressor and add some lows to them. The kick is quite thin atm. Needs to be heavier imo. Overall tho, a good tune. Enjoyed. 
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03-03-2009 20:20 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Sounds sick and entertaining.
Bass could do with a tad less hi-end.
Drums could be a tad beefier.
More variation would be welcome.
Needs a breakdown with some random radio-tuning going on (am-spectrum with bad quality audio and disturbing noises).
Good job.
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04-03-2009 17:16 |
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xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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thanks for the input peeps, i've done some work and i'll have a new version very soon, sounding much more diverse now.
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04-03-2009 23:03 |
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demure
mastication fo de nation
Registration Date: 22-01-2009
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some nice break action going on in the intro but i would have to agree that the bass is a bit uncomfortable but a little tweakin will sort it out bit of variation in the bassline and ur laughin for a jump up tune apart from that not bad for 1.5 hours work mate just keep pluggin away cant really say much more till i hear more but nice so far
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07-03-2009 01:38 |
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