drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Lightningflash - Sexual Lightningflash - Sexual Author Post Lightningflash Wicked Producer Registration Date: 25-07-2005 Posts: 299 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Sexual' and post your comments here! could be a bit to crisp over all can you let me know __ "EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE." Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745 02-03-2009 22:12 xevex Producer Registration Date: 06-08-2007 Posts: 45 interesting. umm well, i guess i'd say this isn't my style. i really can't hear any sub, and with no sub the kick should have much more bass. the snare sounds good but too long like reverb. the tune is very repetitive, the intro very strange, whole tune just weird to me but pretty cool. peace 03-03-2009 03:00 drw89 Sponsor Registration Date: 26-01-2009 Posts: 105 Helpfulness rating:  The intro ambience sounds nice, but the plucks/piano sound childish. The sample of the women's voice sound really good though. The drums need working, theyre too crisp in deed. And you may lay off the delay a little bit on them. The break that's in your track is nice and dark, i like it. After the break though the drums begin to stress me, the snare is too snappy for me and the drums too repetitive. This could be a good track but you might consider my points when improving the track. Sincerely, DRW __ . 03-03-2009 11:59 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  I do like the melodies and the dramatic vibes here, but it is a little strange. It's difficult to know what to make of it. I don't think it could even be described as dnb (that's not a criticism). It's actually quite refreshing to hear something so different. However, I think your beats needs more work. They sound very thin and tinny to me. They need to sound fuller, more powerful. The vocal sample is ok but gets a little tiresome, it probably needs some weirder FX to make it more interesting. An interesting tune tho mate. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 03-03-2009 20:53 Sozai Producer Registration Date: 27-01-2008 Posts: 24 Helpfulness rating:  Heya! Yeh its a very different track, which is never a bad thing, and its always good to challange yourself and do something different. Its not nescessarily a tune i would go for, but hey its what floats your boat There are a few thinks that I think would help the track. Firstly i think your snare sounds way to 'tinny' so I reckon you should layer it up with a few others for some more punch and a more defined snare. Also same with the kick! It sounds flat to me and needs more punch too! Also it depends what your going for as its a pretty far out track, but to add a bit of body to the track I would probably add a bass track to move things along. 04-03-2009 11:38 c_ctrl Wicked Producer Registration Date: 02-06-2008 Posts: 307 Helpfulness rating:  Moody intro, sweet as! It's got that 90's cinema vibe which im lovin haha. The drums are thin as hell, really need beefing up a lot. If the rest of the arrangement was quite sparse it might work but its quite a deep sounscape so a bigger beat would be better imo. Love the pads and the fucked up woman speaking tho, top quality. Odd style but definitely original, nice one. __ DeCode & Roary Soundcloud 04-03-2009 14:20 Lightningflash Wicked Producer Registration Date: 25-07-2005 Posts: 299 Helpfulness rating:  Thanx lad's Yer your right about the drums, I think though the hole track is on the tinny side. Im on the cass __ "EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE." Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745 05-03-2009 23:25 demure mastication fo de nation Registration Date: 22-01-2009 Posts: 921 Helpfulness rating:  nice stabby synth think the little piano bit at the begginig could be dropped the talkin in background sounds a bit mad and when the beat kicks in its not really punchy/low enough too much goin on in high frequencys and the beat is a bt too relentles but nice idea love the arpegio/ pad very nice 06-03-2009 05:03 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Lightningflash - Sexual