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Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Eaten Alive' and post your comments here!

Any ideas for sorting the mix out? been working on this tune for so long its doing my head in now...

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02-03-2009 14:32 Homepage of Sephiroth
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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i forgot to cut off the end of the mp3, so ignore the last 2 minds of this one as i havent finished putting it together yet. my bad Frown

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02-03-2009 14:33 Homepage of Sephiroth
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cool tune mate very lively tbh i cant really hear the kick properley though bass is very gritty just think its overpowerin the track a bit turn it it down a tad and let the kick come through a bit more thats all i would say bout it nice track though man
02-03-2009 14:45
Tonedef Tonedef is a male
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nice intro, very atmospheric. beats sound good to me. 1:30 onwards, absolutely love the ideas goin on from here.. only gripe is that the beats could be turned up slightly, or maybe that main wide stereo synth turned down. very nice roller bud, enjoyed it.
02-03-2009 15:06
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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You signed yet? Really powerful track. FX's are jsut great and slight drum hits n shit. The flange is a little much on the drum into just a tinge.

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02-03-2009 18:51 Homepage of Dethworm
Sozai Sozai is a male
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OMG!!! This tune is sick!!!

If I could, I would to make tunes like these all day!! But i just can't make those gritty synths. Any hints on how to make those??????? Big Grin

The only things i can think of for sorting out the mix is I reckon you need to turn down the really hard panned atmos synths, because they are drowning out the beat a little. Also I think those sick synths and bass need to be turned down slightly just to let the track breathe a bit.

If you do sort out the mix a bit, if I picked this up and listened to it at a record store, I'd be hard pushed not to part with my cash for this!!!! Its a heavy tune mate!!!





02-03-2009 21:26
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez Seph, beat is wicked just needs turning up thats all (sounds well eq'd and rolls really well) either that and / or turn the atmos down a bit?

can hear all those lil modulations going on with the bass, really good stuff man

those sub hits are heavy as hell Bigup

no real critique just tone the atmos in the intro down a tad (will make the drums come out a bit more) and turn the drums up a notch and ur done Big Grin

wicked stuff as always!

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02-03-2009 22:07 Homepage of Ketz
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Wow is the first word to come up in my head. The intro is SUPERB, you got an A+ in sound design Smile . The way you build up is really the style i like.
This style reminds me of Dizplay & NPhect, the bassline or however you may call it is sick, really just sick.
The break(?) is nicely done, my expectations were high, but when it broke down there was merely a few drums!? Where is the rest of the end? (ok just saw your comment on the mix out) MAybe you could try to make a different softer bassline over the end with more relaxing drums and that voice you used. I'm not a star in mix-outs but you could consider trying that!
Nice track dude keep em coming!

Sincerely, DRW Smile


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03-03-2009 12:09
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nice evil track mate with some great growls, cant comment on the mix as i am listening on my inlaws pc speakers whilst on holidays. but the general feel is evil and pumping, love the sounds you have used overall gor sure. beautiful snare, love the mid thump to it Smile

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04-03-2009 23:19 Homepage of goonybag
D2o D2o is a male
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sweet intro from the off.
Sinister vibes Devil

oh like that filtered beat.
That bass tease was sexual.

Snare needs something else. Some more mid layered in rather than eq'd in.

Sweet drop.

Love the vibes and variations etc.

Few mix issue though:

the low mids = Some of the reeces have too much low end in them which make it a little crowded and the volume here really increase drastically when some of the bass come in.
I think some of the top end of the reeces get lost a bit too. Maybe boost some upper mids to help them stick out of the mix rather than boosting to volume.

Sounds like im being negative but i really like this and want to see it reach its potential! Drummer

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06-03-2009 10:55 Homepage of D2o
Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male
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It's pretty dark! The kick can use a layer or 2 and maybe add a high freq distorted snare layer also. Like the bass in the drop. Maybe EQ the highs on it a bit to make it sharper. Good FX and sounds. The main video game vocal sample can use a little more FX. Like the tune. Cheers. Z

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