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demure demure is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Jungle Stalker (preview)' and post your comments here!

quick track made in reason 4 using mainly thor. again need an intro and a few issues with the bass needing to be tightened up
28-02-2009 23:47
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Listening to this on a laptop, So I can't give a sound quality review,

But this track is cool mate. Sounds like an old Total Science / Simon Smith song. Bit repetitive, but it does have some fantastic elements. Real nice ideas. Like the piano a lot

Now just get those elements and turn it into a cool track. Could be a nice summertime roller.Happy




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01-03-2009 00:02
optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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good stuff man. yeah i can see it was a pretty quick track from what ya said with the obvious need for intro and outro even, but the idea is pretty good. maybe some working of variations to help spice things up a bit too. beats sound pretty good and bass is not bad. i like how you slowed them beats down around the :40 and 1:25 mark. nice touch. might have a pretty heavy duty track if you can just finish it out and get another version up. Bigup

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01-03-2009 05:28
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez matey, just seen a new player lol sweet Big Grin yeah man strong vibe as per ur usual, so u got the main riff down good stuff (hardest part imo) defo got potential to be a banger

suggestions: mix generally sounds ok, would be nice to have some variations on the beat in particular (as its an amen variations are a must imo haha) that lil slow down bit on the beat is nice as optical assassin mentioned, some nice airy fx, swooshes n swirls during the breakdown section would work a treat

good stuff mate get it finished! Big Grin

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01-03-2009 14:23 Homepage of Ketz
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Piano is too silent and fighting for space.
Some FX sound off tone (near the end of the piano parts when drums are playing too).
Nice roller, does the job!

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01-03-2009 23:30 Homepage of BattleDrone
alternate force alternate force is a male
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yeah mate nice , i think maybe the kik could come down in pitch a bit , and would like to hear some sub on the breakdown , and im sure ur going to put some more variation on ur track Smile , try changing the reverb on the wobble sometimes on some different breakdowns !!

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02-03-2009 13:33
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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drums get repititive really quickly.....need more variation and more movement to em...vocal sample is nice, bass works well but again very repetitive, nice piano, track needs more fx and more automation etc to gel it all together, doesnt flow smoothly enough....think the sub could be boosted more, doesnt fit together with the kick well enough...arrangement needs more to it, more variations, fills, edits etc...but overall a decent mix, got potential, just needs more going on.

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02-03-2009 14:15 Homepage of Sephiroth
Tonedef Tonedef is a male
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nice keys bud, this track reminds me of total science - dee pee, one of my all time fave dnb tracks, think that vocal sample is a touch overused.. would sound ace if there were a few more of them to add variety. tune itself is spot on tho, very much enjoyed it. nice work Smile
02-03-2009 15:10
Sozai Sozai is a male
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Hey dude thanks for commenting on my previous track! Comments and ideas are always nice and welcome!

Yeh like the track! not much really much to comment on because you obviously know your stuff. Only can really think of changing up the amen a bit for some variation and just a few slight tweeks in the mix to make all the elements in the track more crisps and prominent.

Other than that your on to a heavy tune!
02-03-2009 20:44
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