drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » g2theross - Fugutive Wip g2theross - Fugutive Wip Author Post g2theross G2theross Registration Date: 04-10-2008 Posts: 24 Please check out my new track 'Fugutive Wip' and post your comments here! This is my third track, also made on fruities. It's chock full of samples supplied by this website, thanks a lot to all the peeps who uploaded them. Im yet to properly construct the breakdown; the track is around 50% complete. Opinions would be highly appreciated. 27-02-2009 08:19 rez Wicked Producer Registration Date: 15-04-2008 Posts: 333 Helpfulness rating:  nice intro, creates a cool mood... drums are good but way to weak, you need to boost them up. liking the bass in the intro and vocals... 2nd bass is nice as well, but it all lacks some energy. maybe layer the drums and change them up every 8 or 16 bars, play around with filter etc... there is so much you can do but i really love the beginning, keep workin on it! __ o_O 27-02-2009 19:09 walcor by walcor Registration Date: 14-02-2008 Posts: 140 Helpfulness rating:  ok...the bass is too quiet, and the drums are a bit too somewhere next door... My advice, beef up the bass, and the drums...fiddle with the FX a little... otherwise nice track u got brewing here! Just needs a little tuning... btw nice use of the samples...I too use most of the samples from this site in my tracks... Peace __ walcor on last.fm walcor on SoundCloud 28-02-2009 11:35 alternate force Cool Producer Registration Date: 23-01-2009 Posts: 215 Helpfulness rating:  well , the vocal fx at the begining is too loud and then the beat comes in too low , needs turning up , the bass is a bit old skool , quite weak , u need some variation on the beat , something ive bin guilty of in the past , as theres only a few pads and the beats low theres not a lot else to comment on , nice attempt thou !! __ http://www.myspace.com/dubkinetik 28-02-2009 14:25 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  sounds like the snapshot bass lush vibes with the combination of pads, shiny beats, warm sub. i'd say the drums could be brought forward in the mix a bit more sound a bit distant at the mo __ 28-02-2009 15:38 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  Pretty good but the whole thing need more punch. The mix sounds muted. The intro starts off with promise but the main bassline kicks that in at 1.07 is out of key with the others melodies, especially at 1.50, and it just doesn't fit I'm afraid. Personally, I find that bassline quiet uninspiring. I much prefer the vibes you built up during the intro. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 28-02-2009 18:27 Sozai Producer Registration Date: 27-01-2008 Posts: 24 Helpfulness rating:  This is not a bad attempt for your third try! I really like the intro pads and sample vocal. They go very nicely together. However when the beats kicks in, it is to low in the mix! a quick way to help with this is to add a bit of compression to the beat and turn it up in the mix. Its the same when it drops as well, the bass doesn't seem to have enough 'umff' Again layer it up a bit and your well on your way!!! Just keep at it mate! 28-02-2009 21:09 Lightningflash Wicked Producer Registration Date: 25-07-2005 Posts: 299 Helpfulness rating:  drums a bit distant __ "EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE." Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745 28-02-2009 23:32 demure mastication fo de nation Registration Date: 22-01-2009 Posts: 921 Helpfulness rating:  cool little vocal stabs mate i like them the bass dont really sound in any sort of key at tme mo all sounds a bit confused but i dont know u might a bin goin 4 that anyways for a third tracks its pretty good a lot better than my f3rd track come to think of it lol 01-03-2009 00:30 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » g2theross - Fugutive Wip