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N-Vee 
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Please check out my new track 'Motionless' and post your comments here!
This track is not finished. I wrote this song because my girlfriend that broke up with me hit me pretty hard and i've been feelin shite. So this is pretty deep.
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22-02-2009 11:54 |
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Gregg
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Hey N-Vee!
Cool track you’ve got here, I personally like that deeper melodic dnb very much. Beats sound good, kick snare could be slightly more upfront maybe. sub bass rolls very well with them giving the tune the required warmth.
Melodies are good as well as choice of instruments. The guitar in the beginning (and later on too) is a bit too wide for my taste.
When the sub is gone the whole mix seems to be a bit dry tho, I guess you should eq a bit more precisely and leave some of the elements like the strings their natural low end. If I’m wrong and you haven’t actually EQed those, you could add a bassy instrument like a brass for the sections with no sub bass.
Overall mixdown is clear, possibly a bit too high endy but well done anyway.
Good work, enjoyed listening!
Oh yeah, and keep yer head up soldier, life goes on! Do some sports, it’s a miracle cure for a stressed, exhausted and fucked up mind 
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22-02-2009 13:08 |
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Kid Prodigy
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Phat!! Sik Drop the roll in is lovely 2! The mixdown souns pleasing 2 the ear and therefore compliments the type of track! best iv heard on this site! well done.. DV8 with a proffessional master, and maybe some more kinda vocal sweep fx 2 compliment the strings (the way you do this would add Character) then id buy it, without a doubt! if u get it signed let me no wer 2 get it... l8erz
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22-02-2009 19:17 |
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Garfler
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It's a well mastered track with good timing on vocals and effects, the drums sound good and they give strength to the drop. Good structure overall. It's nice to hear a guitar in a dnb track because that's pretty unusual and it really works in this case.
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22-02-2009 19:27 |
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N-Vee
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Thanks gregg much appreciated feedback. will work on the parts that sound a bit dry....adding FX and automation later in the project. Will also try bring the guitar a little more centered and experiment. Also thanks for the tips much respect.
Kid prodigy thank you a lot for your comments feel very chuffed that you like it and very grateful for your extremely generous words. will work on some kinda vocal sweep Fx
Thanks garfler also for your kind comments also much appreciated.
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22-02-2009 20:19 |
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demure
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well i gotta say u gotta look on the brite side mate u wrote a quality tune out of it ( id better emphasise that im sorry to hear that too mate dont wanna be comin across as insensitive 
that got me in trouble on ere already) but seriously mate it is deep but i could see it workin on the dancefloor. just work on makin the break down abit shorter and get a grittyer bass in there maybe bring some anger into it big tune though big ups
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23-02-2009 19:47 |
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N-Vee
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Cheers tech all good mate haha yea man.....mite vary it up with somethin....for now it's just a rough draft...i'll probably come back to it later. i just keep makin new tunes. i have hundreds 
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24-02-2009 10:48 |
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walcor
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well what can I say ...you should break up much more often ...this is some real good stuff, real deep! LOL...naa just messin with the braking up part
enjoined it cool track
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24-02-2009 12:00 |
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wrm
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emotions bursting from this massive man. Best way to filter your emotions is to do something creative. And you did it. Hope it is a relief for u. Relationship can be harsh and painful, but time heals everything...you will get over it man. Track is wicked. Loving those strings. My styleee 
Hope your g/f listens to this one. Maybe she will come back...I will...lol, just kidding. nice track dood
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24-02-2009 18:21 |
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N-Vee
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Cheers walcor and wrm. haha well i hope ya come back wrm and listen to my tunes
.....yea breakin up aint easy ay i couldn't actually make any tunes for a week or so. until one night i was like....fuck it. here it goes
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25-02-2009 06:03 |
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Sephiroth
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great build up, no probs there, maybe a few sfx to keep things interesting...guitar sounds great, maybe add more low-end to the guitar, get more strummage in....vocals sound great...kick and snare are spot on....synth and melodies are great....think you could use a few more drum edits...great tune overall man!
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27-02-2009 13:51 |
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Lightningflash
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ordinary
vert bright sharp sounding mix
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28-02-2009 23:45 |
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drw89
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*JAW DROP*
Sad to hear your GF broke up, but if i would make such friggin good music as this i'd made my gf break up with me. (just kiddin')
I've listened to the whole track and there was not a single thing i didn't like.
Seriously respect mate!
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04-03-2009 00:22 |
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volatile
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well nice sombre intro the sounds come together nicely and the drums that fade in work well to keep the track flowin but the atmosphere the same, top noise violinish sound remind me of hi contrast/ hospital records vibe, the drums are nice throughout and the soft guitar strums keep the feel of the track, good name as well for a tune, not usually my sort of dnb at all but dont mind a soppy one every now and then, not sure about the sample in the breakdown tho think somethin could be done about that, maybe the bassline could hav a slight change as well in the second drop, keep the pattern the same but change the noise slightly make it sound slightly rougher, obviously not so it ruins the vibe of the track but just to give the wsecond drop a bit mor spice. but nice work anyway man
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