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Steppa


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BERMUDA

WOOH!

check this out m8s my latest track:

http://fast.vanmeerten.net/mp3/peet/Peet...4)%20(128k).MP3

any criticism is accepted, and stuff can still be changed around. so give it a go.!

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17-03-2004 22:49 Homepage of peet
Surya Surya is a male
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Cool vocal to open
Nice choirs
Bassline and sub are good, but drop misses a bit power (think it's the drums, not sure).
Would do something about the part @ 1.40, misses something with only the drums.
2.13 works better, better drive.
Gets a bit too repetetive after 4 minutes, I think you need an extra theme with another sound to keep things intresting.

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18-03-2004 11:18 Homepage of Surya
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thanks m8. i'll be continueing with this track to try and get the repetitive side out of it and create more depth and feeling. thanks for the comments.

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19-03-2004 13:46 Homepage of peet
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i'll be coming with something new soon. some more people wanna tell me if they like this?

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20-03-2004 07:40 Homepage of peet
djfreemc djfreemc is a male
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I think the main thing missing is variation. I like the drums very much, but maybe add one or two more different patterns. An extra, less wobly bassline could also give the track some more punch I guess. I like that bass comming up slightly before that drop about I think 1 min from the end, maybe work out that one a bit more. Anyway, it's a very good start, just ad some variation & work it out a bit more.

owhjeah, like that dark kinda vocal too.

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20-03-2004 11:21 Homepage of djfreemc
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Allright. New version. Intro + Outro redone. Midsection redone. Varied the patterns. And better mixdown.

http://fast.vanmeerten.net/mp3/peet/Peet...6)%20(128k).MP3

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21-03-2004 22:15 Homepage of peet
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love the pads in the intro...great modulation and filtering of the basslines...nice energetic drums as well...i like how this one turned out...peace

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22-03-2004 06:53
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