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Puzzle
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Registration Date: 27-05-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Knitemare' and post your comments here!
I havent uploaded anything to this site in 6 months or so. Now I had to.
All basses made with 3xOsc (+effects, resampling and Ketz's tutorials).
PS. I'm not too sure about the name of it, any suggestions are welcomed.
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11-02-2009 20:41 |
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freestyle
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hello, only fair i comment on your tune dude... thanks for mine earlier...
anyway, on your tune now, intro is ok kinda acidy<<< new track name;-)
i think the bass needs more presents, layer what you have with a midrange bass so people with small speakers can hear the bass, im not to fond of the drums but it does all fit together and the hi hats are pretty cool, at 2mins 59 you have a jungle style loop in there, i would say leave it in at the 2nd drop to add a lift to the tune, overall tune is clean and everything stands out so well done with that man, i personaly prefere the 2nd half of the tune as its seems more hype than the 1st half, also i think adding shitloads of noises and fx would benifit the tune, sweeps, echos reverbs and so on...
nice one dude.
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11-02-2009 21:16 |
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cynik
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starts promissing,
drops: not much power. drums are somewhat robotic, dunno about that droning bass, not much movement on it
sounds a bit fruity to me but does have a vibe of its own if that makes any sense. the blip line is sort of hypnotizing
the high synth line later on needs something to happen to it
you should drop that string as it gets annoying after a while.
needs a lot more fx especially on those strings
keep working it
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12-02-2009 01:02 |
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alternate force
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ez , huumm , sounds very techno old skool jungle track , sound qualitys ok , weak in places , but this is not really something that will sell its more of a computer game tune , well hey u might be able to sell it that way
!!! i think cynik hit the nail on the head , it sounds robotic , witch can sound a bit cheesy , but if thats ur thing , try to get some dark or light atmospheric pads on ur tracks , makes all the difference to giving ur tunes more focus !!
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13-02-2009 16:11 |
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Puzzle
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14-02-2009 18:57 |
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