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Please check out my new track 'Allspark' and post your comments here!
dnb tune. comments appreciated
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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10-02-2009 07:39 |
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demure
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sounding good man got a gritty intro wich im likin. drums are good but that snare could do with a bit more attack. its a roller fo sho though. and origiinal too. its got a edgy feel to it and is unpredictable which i like mate its a good tune just the snare lackin 4 me peace
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10-02-2009 13:41 |
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10-02-2009 22:49 |
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Safe cynik-luvvin the intro on this 1,wkd synth sounds nicely blended n likin ur little drum rolls.I personaaly dont see how puttin attack on snare wud help but do think it cud poss hav a touch more bite/lo end to it?Very nice work on basses/fx!This tune is rollin-sounds pretty crisp too
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11-02-2009 16:09 |
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11-02-2009 23:06 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, pretty good. Cool melodies and vibes. Reminds me a lot of Binary Havoc actually. The beats and bass sound very similar (probably cos you both use Reason, duh!). The mix sounds strange for some reason tho, especially the panning. A lot of elements from the beats are slightly panned to the left. Why have you done that? I would definitely centre them. Same with the bassline.
Overall, I think this tune is lacking something. The beats patterns are quite messy and there's not enough here to make it a really banging dnb tune. On occasions it borders on sounding like a metal tune (no bad thing), but if you're going to do that, why not go all the way and really give it some metal heaviness. Like some heavy, chunky guitar riff in there somewhere. Maybe use some cymbals and crashes too, with a natural sounding snare. It's not really working for me at the moment. There's potential there tho.
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13-02-2009 17:59 |
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man feels like i get no time for reviews anymore, loads of peoples tunes have been and gone....
great arrangement and strcuture to the intro, builds up all good, really uneasy feeling...drum patern is nice and original, hear the same drum patterns waaaay too often....drums sound a bit weak imo, needs more low end too em and maybe a bit of compression to make hit a bit harder....snare sounds alright to me cuts through the mix, just isnt loud enough...the drums do need to be re-panned i think, weighted to the left a bit too much, id keep the kick and snare centered and pan the percussion fairly equally left/ right....bass is nice, techy-neuro goodness, strucutre/ arrangement throughout are good, just think the mix could be a bit better and the drums could be a but snappier and harder....defo got potential tho, nice stuff
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13-02-2009 19:10 |
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13-02-2009 22:45 |
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Originally posted by Tomos
Reminds me a lot of Binary Havoc actually. The beats and bass sound very similar (probably cos you both use Reason, duh!). |
fruity fanboy eh?
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13-02-2009 22:48 |
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Tomos
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Originally posted by cynik
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Originally posted by Tomos
Reminds me a lot of Binary Havoc actually. The beats and bass sound very similar (probably cos you both use Reason, duh!). |
fruity fanboy eh? |
My "duh" comment was aimed at my own comment.
And yes, I'm a fruity boy.
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