drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Mov3mnt - Summer Darkness Mov3mnt - Summer Darkness Author Post Mov3mnt Producer Registration Date: 22-01-2009 Posts: 26 Please check out my new track 'Summer Darkness' and post your comments here! My first tune on here. Does need more work so feedback would be greatly appreciated. 04-02-2009 17:37 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  dont like that snare right off. its clangy but also noisy, think you should clean it up using eq not keen on the synth in the intro soundwise. but the melodies are spot on, sort of a melancholic catastrophic vibe the bass drowns the drums as it drops, also for a melancholic vibe which is really cool, think you should use a synth with less harmonics, less "big" soemthings could be done with the beats too, theyre ok but need to be louder and more upfront. ok upon several listens I hear lots of really good sounds, some are not my cup of tea but genereally sound good whats up with the ending lol, could at least stop on pattern end or fadeout, this way the repeating listen is annoying k nice one for the melodies and whatnot but work more on that sound __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 04-02-2009 19:25 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  ez there and welcome to dotbe beat rolls well nice little well defined shuffles, kick gets a bit lost at points when the synths come in tho bass sounds a bit thin as well synths sound a bit too in ur face the drums should probably be brought forward and the synths pushed back a bit could use some more fx to help flow between transitions some of the ideas come in quite suddenly so could be hinted at better not bad stuff overall man! __ 05-02-2009 00:57 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Great soundquality, good break-edits, good buildup. Bassline is a tad too simple and I don't really feel where you want to go with your tune, it's missing a central theme. Looking forward to more stuff from you! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 05-02-2009 01:04 audible Newbie Registration Date: 06-02-2009 Posts: 9 I was kinda bored __ Audible 06-02-2009 19:53 brucifer Making all the tunes your mum loves Registration Date: 23-10-2007 Posts: 997 Helpfulness rating:  Need more bass on your kicks. Sound weak. Personally, not over keen on your synths. They sound a bit cheap and uninspiring. Think you need to layer your drums and bring them forward, your synths are killing them. Hope that wasn't to harsh mate and welcome. __ 07-02-2009 02:07 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by audible I was kinda bored wow what an useful comment, truly amazing __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 07-02-2009 08:35 BEAT|BOSS Newbie Registration Date: 07-02-2009 Posts: 6 a good track could do with a bit more compression n maybe a little less reverb? but yh man its a good one. Ez 07-02-2009 17:26 volatile Producer Registration Date: 16-03-2009 Posts: 5 likin the intro man proper rollin, and the drums are nice and crisp as well, the synth noise that comes in definitley needs sum eq tho, the breakdown before 1st drop is nice, atmospheric and nice reverb on the noises, the drop is not what i expectin and im really not too sure about the synth noise you got over the bass, but when that cuts out n its just the bass rollin wit the drums thats heavy man, i just think the noises you hav in over the top of it dont sit perfectly with the rollin bass and they take away the soul of the track if u get wot i mean, but the bassslne is a winner m8. stik with that and them drums and change the synths on top and it could be a corker. 24-03-2009 14:02 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Mov3mnt - Summer Darkness