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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'A Dedication' and post your comments here!

A dedication to all you back-stabbers...like its said...another track I spent over 2 months on, used Beastie boys accapela which can be also downloaded on their website. Best break I´ve ever made so far. Enjoy! wrm

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04-02-2009 16:16 Homepage of wrm
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Please check out my new track 'A Dedication' and post your comments here!


A dedication to all you back-stabbers...like its said...another track I spent over 2 months on, used Beastie boys accapela which can be also downloaded on their website. Best break I´ve ever made so far. Enjoy! wrm


who are the backstabbers you speak of?

anyway, the almost japanese intro is confusing but when the rhyme and beats drop it comes together. still feel maybe you could quantize it a bit better

also, you should drop that harf (soudns like a harf?) line at some point, as it is it gets tired as the track goes

breaks are really cool, very old school

maybe its just me, dont really feel the tune progresses, like it insists to go on and on till the end, mostly cause of that harf.

not much bass going on

ok take this a biased review, as the production is really good, everything is heard as it shoudl, except for low end

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04-02-2009 19:17 Homepage of cynik
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Please check out my new track 'A Dedication' and post your comments here!


A dedication to all you back-stabbers...like its said...another track I spent over 2 months on, used Beastie boys accapela which can be also downloaded on their website. Best break I´ve ever made so far. Enjoy! wrm


who are the backstabbers you speak of?

anyway, the almost japanese intro is confusing but when the rhyme and beats drop it comes together. still feel maybe you could quantize it a bit better

also, you should drop that harf (soudns like a harf?) line at some point, as it is it gets tired as the track goes

breaks are really cool, very old school

maybe its just me, dont really feel the tune progresses, like it insists to go on and on till the end, mostly cause of that harf.

not much bass going on

ok take this a biased review, as the production is really good, everything is heard as it shoudl, except for low end


my mistake, i wrote it in kinda offensive way...nevermind...the MC is saying "this is a dedcation to all back-stabber..." in the intro...thanks for reply

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04-02-2009 20:02 Homepage of wrm
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i see u spend a lot of time on ur tracks Big Grin which is wicked cuz i can hear all the little details that keep ur music interesting throughout Bigup

sounds pro, great arrangement, loveley melodies really enticing stuff! got a real intelligent dnb feel to this, haven't heard much like this lately so really refreshing man Big Grin

this kinda dnb would appeal to a wider audience too which ofcourse can only be a good thing

loved it Big Grin

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05-02-2009 00:52 Homepage of Ketz
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i see u spend a lot of time on ur tracks Big Grin which is wicked cuz i can hear all the little details that keep ur music interesting throughout Bigup

sounds pro, great arrangement, loveley melodies really enticing stuff! got a real intelligent dnb feel to this, haven't heard much like this lately so really refreshing man Big Grin

this kinda dnb would appeal to a wider audience too which ofcourse can only be a good thing

loved it Big Grin


thanks Ketz!!!

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05-02-2009 09:51 Homepage of wrm
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Like the intro.

Your drums need more punch.

It's a nice track. Just the sound quality is poor. Bass needs bringing forward, drums need binging forward. Vocal needs eqing.

I did enjoy it though. Happy

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intor sounds a bit outta place to be honest...nice drums in the intro, think the vocals could be cut up a little and shifted into place more...few odd words and lines sounds a bit out of time....levels are all good and pads are quality....takes a really long time to build up man, doesn't seem to be any defining drop either...drum work is top notch throughout, sound really good, jus think the tunes lacks a bassline or main hook, really needs some low end to it as it sounds a tad empty....good stuff overall tho, great composistion, drums sounds good and the mixing is pretty tight throughout....nice stuff!

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intro sounds very pro reminds me of linkin park its very chilled out and very original mate i like it its relaxing and sound very pro definately original though mate so fair play to ya ypoouve won me over with this quality tunage
08-02-2009 21:01
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