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Please check out my new track 'Soulless ( 2009 Vip )' and post your comments here!
Yepp, my first track. Finished and ready to go. Finally got around to what some people were telling me on the forum. Anyway, enjoy, and soon, I'll post Perseverance / Interim ( 2009 VIP )
EZZ. =].
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30-01-2009 01:20 |
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thechronic
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LOL the drop scared the shit out of me, I was reading another web page with this playing in the background.
The intro flows very nicely, sounds really nice, nice drum sounds and verb, cool atmosphere with the audience and breathy voices. Nice soothing background music for reading webpages, yum.
THEN THE MOTHERFUCKER GETS TO THE TWO MINUTE MARK AND DROPS LIKE A FUCKING HYDROGEN BOMB!!! YAAARR!!!
Well must say the shock effect works beautifully 
After the drop it sounds nice too, very good layering and balance, the sub bass is just right, drum programming is juicy. There is just one percussive sound (high-pitched, like a tambourine) that is just a touch too loud.
The structure is a bit weird though, after that energetic break it just falls flat on its back (3:59), then turns into what feels like another track with just some drums (4:19), which sounds nice though. Some more dreamy atmospheres, THEN THE MOTHER DROPS AGAIN LIKE A FRIGGIN SLEDGE HAMMER ZOMG!!
Good job on the mixing, compression, effects, balance, stereo width, it's all good imo.
Shake factor is good on the drops, but the slow parts inbetween can lose interest on the dance floor i think.
Try restructuring the track, following a more traditional buildup, see what that gives?
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30-01-2009 15:19 |
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Originally posted by thechronic
LOL the drop scared the shit out of me, I was reading another web page with this playing in the background.
The intro flows very nicely, sounds really nice, nice drum sounds and verb, cool atmosphere with the audience and breathy voices. Nice soothing background music for reading webpages, yum.
THEN THE MOTHERFUCKER GETS TO THE TWO MINUTE MARK AND DROPS LIKE A FUCKING HYDROGEN BOMB!!! YAAARR!!! |
he he , ha ha , u made me laugh alot then chronic 
, i had the same experience as you , i think the drop comes in a bit louder than the start of the track which was quite frightning , heavy tune mate , but the beging needs sorting and it needs to let u know some ting heavy is going to come lol !!!!!!!!!
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30-01-2009 15:47 |
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Ketz
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30-01-2009 16:15 |
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N-Vee
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Intro seems a bit empty and there is a funny sound that hits every second and 4th beat....after the drop it just flew out of nowhere!!! Awesome after the drop but the build really needs something to add to this energy....I mean you don't always have to have a big intense build and intro to a song but I think in this case you need a fuller intro, but overall badass . Good stuff
Kick I think needs some impact. Punch after the drop. but again good stuff 
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30-01-2009 19:53 |
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BattleDrone
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Intro is really really long, although I see what kind of effect your tried to reach with it and it works.
The snares in the main part could be more powerful imo. The main part is repetitive and after a while it gets a bit boring.
Breakdown is a bit too empty and the buildup takes too long as well, in fact it is a remixed intro somewhat which is way too long.
You certainly show that you have a lot of potential with this tune, but over 7 minutes is really too long.
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30-01-2009 23:20 |
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Wally D
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I agree with drone a bit on the intro but from a DJ stand point, I can have some fun with it.
Drums are nice and fit with the bassline..It does repeat some what but thats how this style flows and you make up for it on the second drop.
Cool tune overall.
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31-01-2009 06:10 |
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Reskk
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Really enjoyed the buildup man, that was a really impressive start especially for a first-timer.
Couple of criticisms:
1. You should have kept the tune dark and slightly eerie as the buildup promotes.
2. You should have reduced the gap between the intro and the drop
But hell, those are only the things I would change if I were the one making the tune.
Overall good job though man! Wicked for a begginer: keep it up.
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02-02-2009 13:52 |
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so ya pytch i remember i really liked soulless all those months ago when u first appeared here 
