 George Remaken - Technical point of view(better sounding version) |
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Please check out my new track 'Technical point of view(better sounding version)' and post your comments here!!!
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13-03-2004 14:23 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good buildup, well done
Drop doesn't work, with that great buildup, you expect things to have more power with the drop, but they don't, unfortunatly.
Don't really like the bassline that much, but it's not bad. Give it some more sub though.
Drums are a bit too simple and are part of the problem: they don't have any power.
Melodies and sounds are nice and fit well together.
Like the second buildup to the second drop with the pitchup al lot, but again, the drop itself doesn't deliver. I think you should feal this yourself, that something is missing there, so work on that.
3.5/5
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16-03-2004 16:21 |
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-J-
Big Bad Battyman
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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like it !! snoaring pads in the intro, real nice !
just the bass needs some variation
the first break (where the bass goes up and up slideways), leave out the top melody cause it screws the bass
and layer your beats with a filtered action break (just to add power, won't change the sound of your break if you filter it correctly)
or you could just layer with a hi pass filtered amen (so u get only the hats, crashes and the rolling part of it, without the full sound of the snare and no bassdrum
and then layer your basskick with a standard 909 clubkick and your snare with a 909 snare (u know which one i'm talkin about, the one that says: PSSHHHH 
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but apart from that, great tune
boh !
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21-07-2004 19:12 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Like it. It has this pumping feel but it could defo use some variety.
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21-07-2004 20:15 |
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