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DJ ANARKY
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Please check out my new track 'Dirty B-line' and post your comments here!

Called it this 4 obvious reasons(vocals off kontakt&funktion vst).As always all the basses wer made on zeta.Hav worked on this FLAT OUT 4 last cupple days(no joke)an think with sum more work this cud be my 1st good track!Ne suggestions on how i cud make it better?


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27-01-2009 16:55
cynik cynik is a male
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intro is pretty basic stuff

wehn it dropped there was not enough power in it. suggest adding more subbass to the drop and/or more lower types of bass. the high saw is alright

beats sound good but maybe theres too much low end in the snare

at 2:14 abrupt stop, feels like a different tune mixed in

I do hear where youre getting at with this and its not bad at all. needs adressing a few areas

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27-01-2009 19:07 Homepage of cynik
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Cheers 4 reveiw mate-kno wot u sayin bout that 'gap' at 2.14.Think i just need more volume on the sub i got??
Also-just noticed u gave it a 2 on freqeuncy spectrum n was wanderin wot sounds u think are fightin 4 space??
I aint disagreein with ur views but was wanderin if u cud elaborate on them as i am strivin 2 get better. Safe cynik
O n wud reveiw ur trak but i cant seem to download flash 9 on me new computer.Newhere else i can listen?
27-01-2009 22:21
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I didnt vote

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27-01-2009 22:28 Homepage of cynik
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Fair nuff mate.Whoever has voted it has made it a 1star.Just 4 my own peace of mind-do u think it is at least a 2-mayb 3star???
Safe 4 reveiw neways
27-01-2009 23:59
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I dont look at them at all, rarely ever use it

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28-01-2009 00:06 Homepage of cynik
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez matey, ya dirty! Big Grin that snare u've been using in ur tunes, is very snappy mate, did u compress it at all? sounds a tad too squashed (maybe the attack on the compression is too fast?

eq i don't think is THAT bad (ie 1 star lol) but i will say the tune sounds empty at points, make sure u fill it up, sounds like u've got loads of space in the mix to still fill out

the concept for the tune is defo there just needs layering, the midbass could be beefed up also (or just some more synth action to compliment it whatever works for you)

nice stuff mate, get it finished Smile



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28-01-2009 12:46 Homepage of Ketz
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Ye will defo b tryin to add more n finish this 1.I havent actually used ne compressors/limiters on any of the sounds in this as i aint confident using them.(always seem 2 ruin things :mymistakeSmile I purposely made the snare quite lo(tis hittin bout 150Hz)but think the reason it may sound squashd is that i shortened it to half a beat!Neways cheers 4 reveiws-will hopefully have a finished version soon. Bigup
28-01-2009 16:06
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This is still dam cool and your structure is good and the ideas were awesome. I just don't think the bass is full and the B Line doesn't really get me. I like the variation though its awesome. I'd experiment by layering your bass to make it sound fuller and turn up the bass. But goin in the right direction.

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30-01-2009 19:31
DJ ANARKY
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Safe n-vee.Cheers man-ye, am guna get on it 2day n try sum other layers 2 fill out the freqeuncys. To b honest iv noticed thers a bit of a gap on freq analyzer btween 220-270Hz so will prob try sumthin to fit in ther.Neways safe 4 reveiw as always.

O ye mate-nuff respect on that nickk zz remix u dun.Sounded well pro man.Only didnt reveiw cus had so many alreddy. Bigup

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31-01-2009 14:26
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