its a wicked idea for a track, would work on a dancefloor 4 sure, likin all the ambient sounds an switch ups with the drums, at 1:52 however the drums get a bit manic imo. Bass sounds a bit muddy at times aswell? id maybe rethink how uve eqd it? anyways soundin good. nice 1
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First vocals need twisting to add to a dark atmosphere. Especially the vocal before the drop could do with some twist and it should be more upfront. Good vibe, even for someone who doesn't like this style too much this is well done.
Tune would sound even better with some hi-passed organic reese-like sound tearing over the top here and there (to represent the biohazard).
I'm not a big fan of sampling a lot of movie dialogs, but I guess it is typical for this style.
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Yeah, pretty good and definately original. Lots of attitude there, which is great. However, I think you need to work on your EQing. Your kicks are very, very boomy. They really cloud all the mids and highs. The whole thing sounds too bass-heavy and muffled. Towards the end there are some strings which I can just about hear if I concentrate. If your bass frequencies weren't so loud and dominanting, these string would have much more impact. The same goes for all the other background sounds and FX. At the moment, they are being overshadowed by the boomy kicks. A good effort tho.
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1 my sub is too loud - (my speakers dont represent a good low end response) , i heard this from other people too so i'll change that , maybe then the sound will clear up more...
2 vocals are dry - yes it didnt realy add fx to it , didnt feel to do it
3 kicks are boomy - i guess first because my sub is too loud too , otherwise its like this for at a party , its not made for home listening , it works
4 i should add more high end to the mix , but i'll see how it sounds elsewhere
5 i will let it master by Matar on his speakers
6 allright bitches , remember its made for dancefloors , punchy puncy
thanx for the response
tunes can always sound better , but u have to accept the limitance , track = track
ok mate this ones a bit more concise than your last tune, but also I hear theres space for improvement
the snare can be more full with one more organic middle range snare layered on top
the bombardment of the kick drums is great, Id love to hear a part wehere theres a bass doing the damage with maybe more midrange warping kind of bass and the kick is in the back or more like in a standard loop
1:42 bass is a little overpowering at those times, in the others it goes good with the kick
the lead is awesome, although I think theres room for the lead to go crazy, more melodic excursions, I love it being robotic but I would be tempted not to experiment with it more
i know what u mean cynik , but i hate working to long on a track , i realy tend to fuck it up , brr its a waste of time , and in the meanwhile i make new tracks and buy monitors ! (when i get home from romania)
