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D-Face
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Please check out my new track 'Broken Voices' and post your comments here!


This Track Was Made Whithin A Day On a Demo version Of FL Studio With Limited Samples Due To Bieng Away From My Comp It Has A Dodgy Break Down But Wanted To Put Something Up On The Site... Hope You Like Just Look For The Funk! Give Me Some Comments Will Get Some Proper Work Up Soon In A Week Or So.


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14-01-2009 06:51
Krisch Krisch is a male
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This Track Was Made Whithin A Day On a Demo version Of FL Studio With Limited Samples Due To Bieng Away From My Comp It Has A Dodgy Break Down But Wanted To Put Something Up On The Site... Hope You Like Just Look For The Funk! Give Me Some Comments Will Get Some Proper Work Up Soon In A Week Or So.
14-01-2009 10:24 Homepage of Krisch
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This thing needs percussion, hihats and a break.
The structure is non existant, it jumps everywhere?
The shortlooped get on my nerves pretty soon.
If you start from what seems a random set of samples you can't expect a masterpiece to appear in a day.

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14-01-2009 12:38 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez man, welcome to the dotbe Wink

sounds very experimental to me, very trippy, as BD said, theres no hats, could use some to get some sort of flow going, sounds a bit too robotic with just the kick n snare in there

structure doesn't flow, very random indeed

overall i would suggest just filling it out more and also to layer it up a bit more so the whole thing is more cohesive

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14-01-2009 21:19 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Love What You Have Done Here With This Track Also Love That Intro Really Sets It Off With a Mellow Kinda Groove Feel Then a Fat Drop Nowhere. It Be 4:30 In The Morning Had 2 Hours Sleep In 48 hours Can Still Tell This Is A Well Put Together Track Big Up Wally D YOu Da Man (Listening Out Of Laptop Speakers Right Know I Know Thats Sacrilage But Still Sounds Awesome Love That Break I Usually Make Hardstyle, Hard trance, But Recently Been Making Jungle And A Bit Of Breakbeat Should Have Some Stuff Up soon If You Would Do The Honours Of Commenting On it Would Be Appreciated Constructive Critiscism Welcome Gonna Have To Get Some More Of theese Reviews Done Though Ha ha I Do Honestly Like the Track Nice beats Keep Em' Rolling The Names "D-Face" By The Way i am officially loving this beat would buy it if could let me know. Do Some Proper Tune Reviews And You'll Get Some Back.

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14-01-2009 23:10 Homepage of Tomos
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Whaddup D-Face. Yeah man... I mean, there's definitely a load of work to be done building structure and achieving power in the kick, snare and sub, but wikid idea! I honestly really dig it very much! So simple but so effective! Like the robotic feel you gave this. Could be a very nice tune if you worked more on it. And seriously dude, I'm being a nice guy by giving you this review... You need to give some proper ones, not some random shxt just so you get named a producer.... Neway, cheerz for the upload and welcome to dnb.be. Enjoy your stay!!!
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15-01-2009 03:10 Homepage of Pytchlocka
N-Vee N-Vee is a male
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There are some awesome Ideas in this mate. Somethin you never really hear often and I like your experimenting. F@#kin fantastic for addin somethin a little different . I'm always out for new sounds. But there are lots of elements like getin a nice smashin kick and snare....and you needa add somethin to fill this song a bit..its just a bit empty.

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17-01-2009 03:48
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Love What You Have Done Here With This Track Also Love That Intro Really Sets It Off With a Mellow Kinda Groove Feel Then a Fat Drop Nowhere. It Be 4:30 In The Morning Had 2 Hours Sleep In 48 hours Can Still Tell This Is A Well Put Together Track Big Up Wally D YOu Da Man (Listening Out Of Laptop Speakers Right Know I Know Thats Sacrilage But Still Sounds Awesome Love That Break I Usually Make Hardstyle, Hard trance, But Recently Been Making Jungle And A Bit Of Breakbeat Should Have Some Stuff Up soon If You Would Do The Honours Of Commenting On it Would Be Appreciated Constructive Critiscism Welcome Gonna Have To Get Some More Of theese Reviews Done Though Ha ha I Do Honestly Like the Track Nice beats Keep Em' Rolling The Names "D-Face" By The Way i am officially loving this beat would buy it if could let me know

It's so incredibly helpful to get copy pasted reviews isn't it?

I have removed your copy/pasted reviews. Also the producer rights which you have received unfairly have been revoked and your track has been deleted.

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18-01-2009 18:25 Homepage of thechronic
Gregg Gregg is a male
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It's so incredibly helpful to get copy pasted reviews isn't it?



It at least shows that he seconds what someone else said once. Big Grin
18-01-2009 19:47 Homepage of Gregg
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