This has some super phat potential.
The vocal should be dirtier to fit the overall feel better. Maybe you could cut a bit of low end on the vocal to get a more phone-like voice. The main bass is too huge and a tad muddy imo. It sounds like you used reverb on it (?) might want to turn that down a bit and EQ the 250-700Hz range a bit down on the bass.
In fact the whole tune sounds pretty reverberish.
Good work though, it all feels dark and it fits together very well.
If you have a phat bass theme like this tune one your tune doesn't need like 10000 melodies to keep it interesting
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cheers bro you always know the best things to say. thanks heaps for your help. I found some things i did accidentally with the bass and now that i have taken all that low end out of the vocal it sounds much better. No reverb on the bass just turned it down a notch. I can definitely feel i'm headin towards what I'm really wanting to create. Although I'm down for creating anything from luquid to dark ....... I'll always throw in somethin interestin....for now i just keep on learnin.
Listening on headphones. First off good atmo setting for the intro, definetly dig it, and that vocal fucking rips. Guitar riff sounds like it has a tad to much reverb and compression onnit, but loving it either way. The break buildup before the drop at 0:42 sounds waaaay off. Need to edit it to fit better, or completely take it out. The breakdown before the main drop, runs a lil long for me, but the buildup is alot better than the first. Sets a good tension, and the 2step break edits are perfect for the tune. But once it drops you should throw a speedy hi hat in there, to get a rolling feel to the tune. Like what ya did here with this, maybe some variation to the bline/sub action, the hi hat, and a lil more work on the structure and this tune would rock even better.
Clear production. Shouts to that! Break got nice live feel, liking that. The kick is a bit too much on the volume imo. Nice bass edit and automation work! The track is very well mixed. But...it somehow lacks some head-noding bussines. I would change some elements so it flows better. Maybe the bass pattern. Changing few notes can always do big things.
Awesome beginning. Dripping sick track here. Really tight compressed drum and great bass and sounds here. Excellent drop. Really not to much to say for this one except excellent job. Top production in my opinion.
Great tune mate. Really crisp sounds coming out here, especially the bass.
Haven't got anything to add which hasn't already been said. Just wanted to drop a word and say I'm diggin this.
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Haven't got anything to add which hasn't already been said. Just wanted to drop a word and say I'm diggin this.