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theaudiodemon
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Survival' and post your comments here!
Been a while since I last posted up a track on here, some fresh material for '09.
Made with Reason 4, made 95% of the samples, used 4 snares, 2 kicks and EQ'd.
See what you think, all comments welcome
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01-01-2009 21:10 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad, very original sounding, but a bit empty. There's no real melody in this one, just a break a sub and sound effects. It would be good to add some elements to get this one filled and alive.
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01-01-2009 22:39 |
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N-Vee
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Registration Date: 07-11-2008
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not much of a fan of the snare thats there or the build up the four snares...missing that snap. the song is just missing some elements it just need something else. but like your drum transistions and of course the drums are pretty cool .....the second drop rolls in but very much all the same. I like some thing in this track but the track itself for me doesn't quite get me.
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08-01-2009 04:23 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Listening on headphones. OK first off sounds like there is way to much into the hi freq on the break, kind of kills my ears a lil. Like the vocal sample, maybe edit some glitches to add to the buildup. Buildup is kind of weak, needs some work. I like the sub action, but the hi bline needs more variation to it. OK, at 1:30, there is this glitchy FX that comes in, that throws me off a lil. I personally, would take it out completely. Second buildup is better, but still lacks that umph/tension. The rapid kick when it drops also throws ya off, but you got a good lil work in progress here. Keep rockin it
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08-01-2009 07:46 |
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Muad'Dib
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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The beginning takes a while... interesting background sounds, but too loud, I think. Nice bass combinations, but are getting boring as they repeat all the time. Maybe another combination in notes might solve this.
The beat is a bit repetitive tbh. And is way up in my face, like it is the only thing present here. The other sounds are fighting for space.
Try fixing these things. Has a potential, though.
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08-01-2009 15:31 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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intro drums are nice and energetic but dont seem to fir that well together imo....that vcoal sample is quality but you haven't build everything around it well enough...id drop everything out on "want your soul", would defo increase the impact of the drop....drop lacks definition, doesnt sound the culmination of the build up and there doesn't seem to be any real bassline hook to keep things going...gets pretty repititive pretty quickly imo, you need more elements and changes to the track to keep people hooked....main kick and nare could use boosting too and would help gel the drums together...its got potential but it needs to be mixed with some elements i.e. kick, snare, bassline mixed up front with other elements working around them.....not bad stuff overall, jus needs more work...
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10-01-2009 19:08 |
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