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CLARKFADER
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Please check out my new track 'Meditation' and post your comments here!

hi , i started this christmas day , bin tweakin it yesterday and today , made on reason 4 , hope its right , please let me know , cheers !!!!


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27-12-2008 14:26
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this is a really sweet minimalstic tune, great work. the buildup is nice, only thing i dont like here is that the melody is a bit too simple (like the one in the intro and at the end).
drums are cool, track is well mastered id say, so good job overall, enjoyed listening to it Big Grin

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27-12-2008 22:12
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I’m having a major déjà vu with those chords…well actually a déjà listened but you know what I mean. They are not necessarily too simple or cheap, it just seems to me that I have heard them before and quite often. The initial sample or whatever (synth?) it is sounds cool so maybe work the programming a bit more. The bit you’ve changed later on didn’t really work for me.

Production is clean, nothing to complain. Good eq.

Drums roll nicely, snare is snappy enough for me, only your kick is sorta weak. Could be stronger and more upfront.

I like most of your other elements. They work well together, tune has a good feeling.

What you could also focus on a bit more is the section where you’ve only got your drums and the sub bass which is a bit to empty. You could simply add an element there or just make the bass stronger, maybe add some harmonics, distort it slightly to give it more warmth and to prevent the listeners attention to fade away.

Like what you’ve done. Keep at it!
28-12-2008 01:19 Homepage of Gregg
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ez Clarky, yeah i hear what Gregg is sayin bout deja..listen haha i swear i used similar chords / rhode type sounds years ago in a breakbeaty tune - but enyways i really like em, creates a really cool vibe

beat comes in niceley, again agree the kick needs more oomph snare is comparitively a lot clearer in the mix, sub could be a little bit more prominent imo

everything else sounds very neat n tidy Bigup i think soe additional element would help generate a little bit more interest

good stuff here matey - keep em comin!

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28-12-2008 11:34 Homepage of Ketz
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The drums don't catch me enough, drumline could be a tad more punchy. Tune has big potential though.

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28-12-2008 11:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Quite a chilled one this, likin it. The sub bass sounds good, but i think u could still have a slightly dirtier soundin bass in places, jus to keep it interesting. Likin the chords an stuff over the top. Nice 1.

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28-12-2008 16:20 Homepage of Timmi
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Lovin the intro sounds professional and clean...love the filtered kick comin in and snare reallt good....maybe use another element about 50 or so seconds into it to really build the track...when the strings go away it's very empty. and the bass is a bit soft...needs some little bite to it. but i like the structure of the track and all the sounds you have used this is great laxed track man good job Big Grin awesome

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28-12-2008 21:29
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I like the chord sequence and atmospheric sounds in the intro.

Balance and frequency spectrum are really good, it sounds gorgeous. Maybe a touch too much reverb in the high end for my taste.

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29-12-2008 16:33 Homepage of thechronic
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wow! 4 posts from Chron on one tune!! Big Grin Clarky i would be flattered if i were you! Tongue Tongue

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29-12-2008 16:38 Homepage of Ketz
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Lol there's some level of irony here.

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29-12-2008 22:04 Homepage of Phalanx
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Originally posted by MinasTirithGuard
Lol there's some level of irony here.


er Huh , how do u mean ?????
29-12-2008 22:45
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oops sorry about the double posts, I was testing a change I made in the voting system, didn't notice it resubmitted the review every time Frown I'll remove them Wink

BTW it is not my habit to write such short reviews, I got sidetracked by the voting system when I had just started writing...

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30-12-2008 02:16 Homepage of thechronic
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