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Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Dont Fit In' and post your comments here!


put together from a jazz rock track from 1976
mixed with head phones dont now how it sounds otherwise, please tell my.

If you cant get the player go here
http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Lightningflash: 24-12-2008 22:54.

24-12-2008 19:53
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hello mate, very original piece of music here and the vocal fits perfectly Big Grin

not sure the kick sits in the mix, sounds slightly distorted, maybe its clipping?

even tho its jazzy the drums lack impact but the sequencing of them is really good, lots of cool edits Bigup

bass sounds a bit distant could do with bringing it forward

some great ideas here, think the structure could flow a bit better, cool stuff!


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24-12-2008 20:00 Homepage of Ketz
Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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thanx mate
yes the kik is probably clipping I was slightly aware of it but thought others may not notice to much.
Id like to comment on others stuff but the player is not appearing and I cant find way to get it.
Ill try to do something wid the bass

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24-12-2008 20:12
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quote:
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yes the kik is probably clipping I was slightly aware of it but thought others may not notice to much.


There's no hiding on this forum mate. Big Grin

Yeah, the kick is definitely clipping but I've heard much worst tbh. As for the tune itself, it's so unique that I don't know what to make of it. The beats are interesting but quite messy and they don't flow enough I reckon. Sounds like a beat pattern that has been speeded up to twice its original speed. Doesn't really work, if you want my honest opinion.

I do like the vocal samples tho. And some of the jazzy melodies sound quite nice too.

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Id like to comment on others stuff but the player is not appearing and I cant find way to get it.


Read this thread to get some ideas on how to get the player working again: Music player won't show up with latest Flash Player 10

For me, swtiching to Internet Explorer did the trick.

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Sounds refreshing, but not catchy enough for a dancefloor unless the crowd is already heated up.
Drums lack punch, meldoy sounds a bit techno because it repeats so often.

As an experiment this gets 5 stars from me. It's really healthy to try something different every once in a while.

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sounds like jungle drummer, cool drums, i reckon u need to add some other drums over the top jus to reinforce the kick an the snare, cus it still sounds too rocky for dnb imo. Original sounds, but i don't know if it would work in a club. nice 1 Smile

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The drum rolls are cool ...theres some new ideas in here and some cool elements but the song just doesn't grab me. it needs something else but i can't think cos its so early in the morning.

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28-12-2008 21:40
Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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thanx a lot lads
I have been away for a week or so and not heard this for that amount of time and yes it definitely needs some work. it sounded ok when I uploaded it but now after not hearing it, I can hear all the imperfections.
I intend on tidying up the drums some and not posting it until Ive given it some time to hear it afresh, I didnt do this this time as I was going away.
Ill be listening to your stuff soon.

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